Hello! Call me Jewel! I'm a girl who loves writing stories, and I also like writing fanfiction! You can also find me on Fanfiction.Net, DeviantArt and Wattpad, all under AnimeJewel246!
2020-08-07 Joined United States
One of the main issues with Sakura though is that she was entirely useless throughout. People keep arguing about how she did end up stronger, but strength means nothing. Look at Winry Rockbell from Fullmetal Alchemist. She was useful in plot development, and character development, despite not being a fighting character. Sakura, however, is a fighting character-and has been one since the very start. I guess Winry isn't really much of a fair comparison, but yeah.
A few kids that are of a Clan also fought and won easily as most of them fought against civilian kids, the name of the eight kids that attracted Naruto was called, he got to know their name: Shikamaru Nara, Hinata Hyuuga, Sasuke Uchiha, Chouji Akimichi, Shino Aburame, Ino Yamanaka, Kiba Inuzuka and Sakura Haruno, well, the last one didn't attract his attention, her Chakra was much smaller compared to the rest.
Anime & Comics · ONyat
You know, it's probably better if you try and show something like this, rather than telling. A lot of the story seems to be telling, and that's absolutely okay! I just think that you should try and show us his talent and strength, rather than having someone directly state it.
'It took me 15 minutes to sense Chakra but he only took 2 minutes and his quantity is already at the level of a Genin... an Uzumaki coupled with being a Jinchuuriki is truly terrifying, this quantity will only increase over time, one thing is sure, his talent is high, extremely high!' Kakashi thought before adding 'His talent is even higher than mine.'
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Well, I suppose that is true. So, mainly overusing miracles are a big problem in stories now. Miracles are enjoyable, but at some point it does start to become plot armor. This tends to get overused a LOT in fanfiction or ******* stories.
Miracles can be tangible benefits. For example, the main character falls off a cliff but miraculously survives, and even finds a wondrously powerful sword. Miracles can also bring about intangible benefits. Using the same example of the main character falling off a cliff, perhaps he'll get to miraculously meet a hermit who's one of the most powerful individuals in the land…
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Just imagine how that conversation's going to go. Naruto literally asking Kakashi straight up in the middle of dinner why a girl is red.
'I wonder why she's red? I'll ask nii-san later.' The blue-eyed thought before nodding, then, he heard the Chuunin Teacher saying ''For today, this is it, we will start familiarizing everyone with Chakra and doing exercises to prepare your body for the future, also, the generic subjects will also be taught, starting from tomorrow!''
Naruto, the Uzumaki Emperor [Completed]
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