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I Am very excited for this story! the flow is great and it's easy to imagine the scenes. it is hard to find Yakuza stories and it's not riddled with grammatical errors. 😊

After chapter 40, the editing goes downhill pretty quickly. Amazing story!!! But it is distracting when he/she is mixed up as well as no punctuation is used anymore. I would love to help edit it as this book is more along the lines of a work of literature.

It is a great story. I feel the same feeling I used to get when I would read stories of King Camelot. A total escape and fun to read.

I Agree as well! it is definitely a hidden gem. I love the books on here but this is a breath of exciting, adventurous air. Arthur, keep up the good work. ❤️

this book has all the right elements to it. it has sad moments, but not where you are bawling. At times it's peaceful. you feel her worries and agree. Then it's able to build the suspense for a great climatic effect. Such a great cliff hanger for the end of the 40 chapters 😱 Now I just want it picked like yesterday!!!!!!

it was a good short story. After reading so many novels on here that are hundreds of thousands of chapters, I was worried it would seem cut off. though the last chapter did end on a good note. it was a sweet end that you can't really ask for more 🙂

oh my goodness!!!!!!!!!! I love how unique this story is. it's so fun 😊😊😊😊😊 I hope it's picked, like TODAY 🥹😍🤯🥰👍👍👍👍👍🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

I love how exciting the plot is.😍😍😍😍😍😍 I can't wait until more chapters are released¡!!!!!!!!!!!!🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹 please hurry up 😊😊😊😊😊

Love it!!!!!!!! 💗💗💗🤯💗💗💗 I really hope this book continues to release more chapters soon. 🍄 all throughout 😉😉 it's nice change of pace from the regular finds on here.

the story is progressing at a fun rate. it is also fun to see how a smart person pretends to be a fool or even blind 😂😂😂 I can't wait for this to be accepted and update regularly!!

Normally the rebirth stories are more dark or have a lot of negative emotions at the beginning but this one is not. The FL made up her mind and is determined to set things right. At this point she has a cute and positive outlook for how she is going to live this time. the revenge plots have not been finalized yet, but I think her and her fiancee will setup some epic events.