TheEldestben

10d

Commented

man what you've done with this book is so great. keep up the good work you're you chapters give me something to be excited about.

ch 360 Return to Novigrad

The Witcher: The Divine Hunter

Video Games · Leohart

TheEldestben

12d

Commented

really hope everyone makes it back to the village kind of worried that naruto is going to get captured

ch 76 Naruto : Uchiha : Chapter 76

Naruto : Uchiha Clan

Anime & Comics · sybife

TheEldestben

28d

Commented

why didn't Roy ask him how to undue the curse?

Roy nodded. The doppler was now a great ally with the witchers, since they had dirt on each other. Gawain had enough of his old life. Now that he was one of the biggest rulers in Novigrad, there was no way he would give that up and go back to being a nobody. He knew he owed all this to the witchers, and he made a pact with them.

The Witcher: The Divine Hunter

Video Games · Leohart

TheEldestben

1mth

Commented

liking the exam shake things up dude

ch 38 Chapter 38: Trial of Janus Part One!

Despite it All

Anime & Comics · AfroLord

TheEldestben

1mth

Commented

I like that even though he's imprisoned he still helps the leaf 👍

"You never keep things boring Danzo. Now there's something else I'd like to discuss. About a certain Genin."

Despite it All

Anime & Comics · AfroLord

TheEldestben

1mth

Posted

If you are on the fence about this book, just give it a chance. I've read a lot of Naruto fanfics, and very few are written well and make sense. After that, you're lucky for a solid update. This book hits all the marks. You won't regret reading it, I promise.

Despite it All

Anime & Comics · AfroLord

TheEldestben

1mth

Commented

if I had more stones I'd give it. The way the third and danzo are wrote is 👌 so many fanfics make the third evil and danzo even worse than cannon keep up the good work

ch 30 Chapter 30: Rammifcations Part 2!

Despite it All

Anime & Comics · AfroLord

TheEldestben

1mth

Commented

take my stones man this book is too good

ch 29 Chapter 29: Rammifcations Part 1!

Despite it All

Anime & Comics · AfroLord

TheEldestben

1mth

Commented

man such a wholesome chapter keep up the good work 👍

ch 27 Sirius Joins the Slytherin Cause

Harry Potter The New Lord Black

Book&Literature · Nebula_Scribe

TheEldestben

2mth

Commented

man I love this book keep up the good work 👍

ch 26 From Azkaban to France

Harry Potter The New Lord Black

Book&Literature · Nebula_Scribe

TheEldestben

2mth

Commented

Nice, so the Uchiha massacre didn’t happen. Also, Sakura with Guy? I can’t wait to see how that turns out. 👍

ch 0 5 Chapter 5: Teams Revealed!

Despite it All

Anime & Comics · AfroLord

TheEldestben

2mth

Commented

I sometimes feel like your paragraphs are getting moved around. Shouldn't this be up before he leaves the magical creature shop?

"Yes, please. I need a stand, food for a week, some treats, and a pamphlet on how to care for her," Harry requested.

Harry Potter: No More Simping

Book&Literature · Mystic_Verse

TheEldestben

2mth

Commented

I hope he uses the wind control jutsu on the rasenshuriken so it Flys around like a helicopter

ch 496 Chapter 490 : My Own Twist

Naruto : The Wind Calamity

Fantasy · Devil_Hex

TheEldestben

3mth

Commented

shouldn't it be kushina who gets the first kill since she older and going to the academy?

There was a heavy pause where Konya took a deep breath before answering. "We kill those who attack us. That is how we protect our home and our friends. That is what it means to be a shinobi. I wanted to offer you a chance to do that yourself. It is something every ninja has to do at some point or another. It is thanks to you that the ambush was unsuccessful."

NARUTO, Kushina's Brother

Anime & Comics · Cole_Bromley

TheEldestben

4mth

Commented

what was his animal form again? Been a minute since I read

Later that night, he transformed and flew away in the Forbidden Forest for another Lockhart Hunt (Making sure to stay away from the dragons, they burned some of his feathers last time he got curious.).

HP: Eagle Soars

Book&Literature · SHEOGORATH

TheEldestben

4mth

Replied to TheEldestben

writing*

ch 85 Chapter no.83 Orochimaru Vs Team 7 part 2

Naruto : Jinchuriki of the Six Paths ( HIATUS )

Anime & Comics · Adamo_Amet

TheEldestben

4mth

Commented

BTW love how your righting this. it's so nice to have a rinnegan user not be op but still show he's getting there keep up the good work👍👍

ch 85 Chapter no.83 Orochimaru Vs Team 7 part 2

Naruto : Jinchuriki of the Six Paths ( HIATUS )

Anime & Comics · Adamo_Amet

TheEldestben

4mth

Commented

so hoping fujin teaches him during the chunin exam brake

Though it is lacklustre when compared to what he could have achieved had I taught him the Multi Shadow Clone jutsu now and spammed it for a year, this should still improve his basics considerably. More importantly, this improvement shouldn't have much of an impact on major events in the future. So, I don't need to worry about the future changing too drastically.