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male LV 11I like to create my own world in the novel.
2020-08-09 Joined IndiaBadges 15
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what does that even mean? I will get my law?
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Order Immortal
Fantasy 路 Kush63
You mean "I will settle the score with you" right? 馃寶
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Order Immortal
Fantasy 路 Kush63
Can't feel what he's feeling. 馃 It might be life-threatening, yet it feels not so dangerous.
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The WealthTap System: Rising from Rags to Riches
Urban 路 QuantumVoid
It's no fun when the quests are so easy and not life-threatening at all. 馃 People might get bored at a point because of this. Should've been more creative to create quests that might be interesting and thrilled to read. This is just boring. 馃檮
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The WealthTap System: Rising from Rags to Riches
Urban 路 QuantumVoid
If you're writing in first pov format, you should write the dialogues in that way too. Try reading some first pov novels to get an idea how they write and describe things along the way.
"Soooo, how was your summer? Get a girlfriend yet?" Emma teased Caleb
A Dying Star
Teen 路 SWBWG
chapter is too short and I can't grasp what's happening. even if it's a prologue, one should describe something that might give an idea to the reader what this story is about. Otherwise, you should have directly started with chapter 1. that would be better .
ch 0 1 Prologue
A Dying Star
Teen 路 SWBWG
who's her?
I yawned and stretched, checking the time on my alarm clock, it was almost time. I got dressed putting on a flowy black dress with silver specks, they reminded me of the stars. I looked out side the window to see a bright blue sky and a bright sun, it was as if nature was mocking her. I slowly made my way down stairs, my dad was nowhere to be seen, but that was normal. As I slipped on my shoes I felt a silent tear make it's way down my face.
A Dying Star
Teen 路 SWBWG
too much info dump. I'm getting bored again. 馃檮
but there was someone in college that Rex had used to like 'Lia' they got married only a year after getting the job.but this marriage could not last long and they got divorce after two years.
鏈堝厜 hide in the moonlight
Fantasy 路 Hiddensoul_7
馃憖geez...
i'am already in front of your house i want you here in 10 minutes otherwise no one will save you from me, she hung up the phone with a warning.
鏈堝厜 hide in the moonlight
Fantasy 路 Hiddensoul_7
bruh, where's the collans? 馃憖
oh! shit how could i forgot something important, he slap himself. Min bring your car in front of my house i will meet you there, he jumped from his bed.
鏈堝厜 hide in the moonlight
Fantasy 路 Hiddensoul_7
Extra Large 馃寶
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BIOLOGICAL SUPERCOMPUTER SYSTEM
Fantasy 路 PilgrimJagger
Would you like to experience it yourself? 馃槃
Difficulty: F
Omniscient Reader
Urban 路 鞁膘垜
Don't know about this chapter. Too much abuse is shown and the plot with Zion guy is too cliche with too much violence. I just wonder why the old man doesn't complain about this matter to the village chief or any knight. beating mc is okay but beating even old men is crossing the line. How come no one is raising an issue about this. old man and mc seem cowardish but also dumb at the same point. just because the plot wants a villain in the story for mc to grow, doesn't mean any plot is okay with no logic. 馃檮
ch 0 4 Good and Evil heart
Godblade Avenger
Fantasy 路 MZAF
oh, should've said yi-yun's mother or her adopted mother. 馃
The elder bowed responding, "Yes my lord, her name is Jiang Xiaorou, a girl from the lower castes in our Lian tribal clan. She and her brother were originally not from the Lian tribal clan. She was a refugee who managed to find a foothold in the Lian tribal clan. A few years ago, her brother, Yi Yun's mother passed away. The siblings became orphans. It was expected that the two children, without their mother, would surely die, but this Jiang Xiaorou, though young, surprisingly managed to take care of both herself and her brother and have lasted for a few years."
True Martial World
Eastern 路 Cocooned Cow
now, I know. thanks, smart@$$.
He hadn't tried so far because he thought it simply wouldn't have worked but now if he was to test this, he needed to think long and hard about what ability to learn.
My Vampire System
Fantasy 路 JKSManga
is he delusional? 馃ゲ
Everything is fine, but every time he blinked he saw the dark-cloaked stranger and ran even faster. Mr. Isger is the owner of the farm, he'll certainly know what to do.
Rise of the Nightmare Crestmaster
Fantasy 路 PillGrandCreator
quiet"
Everything looked normal, far to the right, from the corner of his eye he could see Miller and Balden working on the cornfield. It was quite as it should be, he told himself to stop letting fancies take him.
Rise of the Nightmare Crestmaster
Fantasy 路 PillGrandCreator
seems like thriller movie
Aldrich reached the farm's short wooden fence safely. A fence that could hardly stop any kind of attack, he never thought about that before this very moment, a short while ago Aldrich thought it couldn't possibly get any colder, he was wrong.
Rise of the Nightmare Crestmaster
Fantasy 路 PillGrandCreator
Oh, that's what he meant. But I don't know what this law is. I guess, I have to read a bit more.
Order Immortal
Fantasy 路 Kush63