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i am tasked with looking...
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Fantasy · Xero_5825
good progression
ch 0 7 Futile struggle succeeds
Fantasy · Xero_5825
sounds like a textbook ....
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Fantasy · Xero_5825
nice intro 😁
ch 0 3 Mosquito Chronicles: Bloodsucking heroic antiques
Fantasy · Xero_5825
doesn't he already know he is a mutant mosquito through the status, so why shocked on having six legs
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Fantasy · Xero_5825
Well, the chapter was a blast too... just I think the MC's reaction to his death and all this situation was a bit underwhelming.Also, I imagined him to be a bit cautious towards the system as he survived all these years. Wouldn't he be a bit cautious? surviving 32 years...And also, the error, was kinda off considering gods took pity on him and provided a customizable reincarnation, hope the author describes it later down this ride.
ch 0 2 Buzzing Fate
Fantasy · Xero_5825
Aye the prologue seems interesting, let me fasten my seatbelt for this ride..
ch 0 1 [Prologue]
Fantasy · Xero_5825
still not believing the shocking effects it will have
"..." He couldn't say snything after this. He just nodded and looked at the sage gem, still not believing the shocking effects of this legendary gem.
Fantasy · That_Cultivator
anything
"..." He couldn't say snything after this. He just nodded and looked at the sage gem, still not believing the shocking effects of this legendary gem.
Fantasy · That_Cultivator
sure, but first can you fulfill a request of mine? .......
"Sure... I will do as you said, but you will have to fulfill my request first..." She looked at him, hoping for him to agree.
Fantasy · That_Cultivator
takes .... you just changed tenses ...
Aiden smiled gratefully at her, feeling a rush of affection towards her. He knew that Ivy was right, but he couldn't help feeling restless. He needed to protect everyone he loved, no matter what it took.
Fantasy · That_Cultivator
but don't be harsh on yourself would've sounded better ....XD
Ivy sighed again, knowing that they were still too weak to face the devils. "Alright, but you won't force yourself too much."
Fantasy · That_Cultivator
that devil... not devils
"Yes," Ivy said softly. "But we need to be careful. That devils must be notified of our deeds by now, and we don't want to put ourselves in danger."
Fantasy · That_Cultivator
hmmm..... thanks for pointing it out 😅😅😅
ch 0 5 Chapter 5 : Reminiscing
Sci-fi · BlAkE_M
Hmm thanks for commenting... and what do you mean by a bit over the place...😗😗
ch 0 5 Chapter 5 : Reminiscing
Sci-fi · BlAkE_M
brackets for system
Currently, with your abilities, you can cast a mosquito buzz up to 0.5 meters in range. But since the spider is much stronger than you, this skill will only affect it for 5 seconds.
Reincarnated As A Mosquito
Fantasy · Xero_5825