Webnovel Author: jayhaydn - Novel Collection

Wonderful world building with a complex main character. This story got me thinking about my life and role in it. Recommend if you want both an exciting and thoughtful read.

You are such an imaganative story teller. You gave created an exciting world with lots of interesting characters. This book is a useful escapism for anyone bored and in need of an adventure.

Such an exciting tone the first chapter has. I am really drawn into the situation the the protagonist is encountering. Think I am in for an adventurous read.

If you enjoy horror and fantasy this book is for you. It is well written with grotesque imagery. I like how this, not all human family, battles together. The characters have complex relationships. There is action from the very beginning and carries on throughout. Celeste is a chilling girl she kept me wanting to know what would happen to her. Well done to the author. I hope this book does well.

What a curious story. I enjoyed the mystery surrounding it from the voice in the prologue to the opening chapters. The characters are believable. I also like the use of coffee as it adds to my curiosity.

If you enjoy Dungeons and Dragons or Sword Art Online then you shall probably like this book. After the first two chapters the writing improves a lot. The author has a large imagination with their magic system and especially world building. I especially like the magical creatures. Keep going author, you are doing really well with your work.

This story is ever so engaging. The writing has an energetic tone which goes well with characters Danny and Clarissa. The two girls bounce off each other and I am enjoying seeing what Clarissa’s motives are. Fab work to the author and her imagination.

This book takes you into an interesting world. I’ve read the first few chapters and want to visit the setting. I expect this to be a really exciting story. I am keen to carry on exploring this world.

A beautifully written book. The descriptions put you right into Jasmin’s world. The fantasy mixed with reality works well for this character and story being told. Lots of luck with this book, author.

This book is well written. I like the use of language and how it draws you into the story. The author is thoughtful and skilled at characterisation as I am keen to learn what drives the motives of both main characters; especially the sister. Fantastic work author. Keep it coming.

It is great to come across a well written book on this app. The story is easy to follow with good sentence structures. I feel sympathy for the main character in the situation he finds himself in. There is some mystery in the plot which I am excited to read. It is an engaging story with realistic situations.

What a wonderful horror story. This book is written beautifully and is both creepy and sad. The characters are well developed and work well with the gripping plot.

If you enjoy high fantasy this is the novel for you. An expansive world with realistic and relatable characters. With some editing this novel is sure to be an adventurous read.

So happy you enjoyed going on an adventure with Al and his friends 😊

This book grabbed me right away because it delves right into the action of the story which are my favourite types of openings. The plot has obviously been thought deeply about. I also like spending time with the antagonist because of his nasty attitude and motives.

This is a very thoughtful story. The author obviously knows their character i side out. An emotive piece with raw emotions. I enjoy how the protagonists life changes from good to bad. Good luck with it author.

A wonderful fairy tail. The three central characters are all going through separate dilemmas but their relationships entwine together which makes for an intriguing read as I want to see what choices they make. The setting has me thinking of The Frog Prince . It works well with the characters. Well done to the author.

A thoughtful piece of writing. The story has a philosophical approach yet is easy to understand. Very well written and stands out because it is different from the normal approach to story telling.