Great chapter
ch 20 Chapter 20
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Goooood chapter
ch 19 Chapter 19
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Love the chapter i hope more come out before i catch up
ch 17 Chapter 17
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A moose? Also another great chapter thank you
ch 16 Chapter 16
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Oh my god great chapter the last part had me laughing
ch 14 Chapter 14
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All of the plant names sound legitimate just wondering how you got them
"The healing potion requires, Turkey Tail Mushrooms, Blood Root, Fire Lily, and the Blessed White Willow Bark; to improve its quality. This upon correct concoction, will result in a Healing Potion of the Apprentice. For the Stamina Potion I need, Cordyceps Mushroom, Thyme, Rose Stems, and Ginkgo. Finally, for the magic potion, Ice Lily, Mana Drops, and Cordyceps Mushroom. We should have collected all of these in the forest," Phoebe briefly listed the materials for each potion she needed to complete her quest.
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Sooooooooooo good
ch 13 Chapter 13
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Another great chapter
ch 12 Chapter 12
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I know its just the story but dear god that was gruesome
As we made it through the line of trees into the clearing where Freyja was lying on the ground just under a giant ape. "Thats a C rank wood ape!" Freyja, while given from the system was still brand new, she was only F rank. The ape looked at us with a toothy grin as it smashed its fist down on Freyja's head. Blood flew everywhere as Freyja instantly died. I broke down in tears for the wolf I only had a short time, but somehow created a bond with. I knew she would come back to life due to some unknown trust that I had in the system but, it couldn't stop me from feeling the loss that came with watching my first companion die. As I looked to the side at Phoebe she had tears flowing down her cheeks as Bagheera began running towards the ape.
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Great chapter
ch 0 8 Chapter 8
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Is that how you spell your real dogs name?
Although my knowledge was limited when it came to beast tamers, upon forming the contract I couldn't help being baffled with the difference. Above my beast their was now a status bar listed (NAME, HP: 100%) in addition, I could feel the current emotions of my new partner which were slightly uneasy. 'I guess I should choose a name for this beast… Weirdly I feel very close to it. I wonder what gender it is.' With this thought I slightly peaked at the wolfs belly. 'So she's a girl… what about Freyja,' with this the status bar changed, (Freyja, HP: 100%).
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I love it sp far keep up the great work
ch 0 6 Chapter 6
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Wow the cliff hanger good chapter
ch 0 5 Chapter 5
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I think you meant angle right?
The alley was dark and a little murky but, unlike the alley I currently resided, this one held little to no stench. In addition, many of the buildings still looked brand new even from this angel where people rarely traversed.
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Andross??? Thats not hus name
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I like The name candice
ch 0 3 Chapter 3
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So We're Co-Owners of a Magic Shop?!
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