Yash_Shah_7482 - Profile

good one

Your stories are shit as well

Loved it. Very interesting. Though wish chps were a bit longer.

"Would recommend to other people?" What did those nice people ever do to you?

Dude. I don't dislike harems. I love them. You however are fixated on them to the extent your brain turned off after reading the word =harem=, read the rest of my review (just 4 more words). The plot and writing is bad. Like in the first chapter itself, the MC begs his father that he doesn't want to make weapons. Fine...Okay. Then dady goes, well might as well sell my shares in the company as well. Like what's the logic? There were 10000 more ways SITOny could have gone about making his own company, rather than that convoluted mess. But still fine, i was fine with that. Then in the next chp, he starts his company and then makes a fresh out of college SECRETARY with no qualifications, experience or contacts the CEO of the company he begged and bitched his daddy to open for him in the previous chapter. While acting like a bratty karen!!! My god I wanted to kill the author at that point for pushing the coolness of IRON MAN in the negative. Then in the next chapter when pepper is introduced, she just monologues, basically - Oh I love tony. Oh tony made me the CEO. Oh tony told me he will have other women in his harem but I am fine with it. At that point i just called it quits to my self torture and just dumped the story and left the review. And as far as your whining about me dishing the harem (my "Brainless Harem" comment) even though there isn't a harem yet.... Plot summary. Story Tags. First 3 chapters.

Brainless harem SI. Bad writing bad grammar. No plot. Dumped.

Very generic si. You can find them a dime a dozen on this site.

Loved the story. Plot is amazing. Grammar is error free. My only complaint is chapters are too shot. But otherwise its superb. Is this story on off.net?