I have read many authors that demotivate their character on their appearances / write their character with a mindset that he is the ugliest. In fact, it has been so common to reading them that I had also started writing that way. But you are completely different from the other authors that I've read. You actually promoted her looks and now I feel it's not so bad to praise your main character every now and so.
ch 0 2 Chapter 1 - Going Home
Teen · AllynaHazel
I really liked all the actions before Zac is introduced to the plot. The prologue is very catchy except when the new names are introduced. I found it a bit difficult to figure out the name transition.
If someone had told Diaan 10 months earlier that she would be living with the generous owner of a modelling company, she would've looked at them like they lost the plot. Now, she's just plain grateful. Who would've guessed that the same lady that was wheeled into the hospital with severe injuries was the same one looking after Diaan and her three-month baby boy, Zac.
Horror · Crimson B
The plot is very very grippy and I enjoyed most of it. I would also advise you to run a grammar check before publishing it and that would just add to the look of it. I love how you designed your world and the detail in some aspects is almost like it's in front of us. Overall, solid job! 👍🏼
Cold Blooded Princess
Eastern · cutelit4ever