poorjoe

poorjoe

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poorjoe
poorjoe
2 years ago
Posted

I almost vomited. Dumb character development, bad writing, simply horrendous plot. I'm sorry I read this piece of bullshit. Later I went back to homepage to read that the author was writing just for patre..on. I amost feel sorry for his paying readers. Dont read it, or read it and then wash your eyes with some holy water.

poorjoe
poorjoe
4 years ago
Posted

Have you abandoned your avatar fanfiction??????????????? Please tell! I even went to you patreo but couldn't find it!! Kindly reply!! Thanksssss

poorjoe
poorjoe
4 years ago
Replied to 0_Jordinio_0

Hey there author-san! Have you abandoned this story???

poorjoe
poorjoe
4 years ago
Commented

I don't know why but I'm almost vomiting due to this cringe factor.

"Me too, Mione" I hugged her as well.

Harry Potter: New World

Harry Potter: New World

Movies · HPMan

poorjoe
poorjoe
4 years ago
Commented

Has this book been abandoned?!

poorjoe
poorjoe
4 years ago
Replied to Ww2Veteran

cringe

This did allow me to study alone with my mother which increased my progress as well as let me spend time with my mother. In the few years I have known her, she has grown on me. I honestly couldn't believe someone could be so loving, I first thought that she was acting, but realised some people are just generally kind-hearted and she is one of those people.

The Tale Of Loki

The Tale Of Loki

Movies · DickMcJones

poorjoe
poorjoe
4 years ago
Replied to kiritoyuii26oo

Anyways I'm entitled to display my own opinion, Webnovel would have blocked me if I said something extremely degrading. But all I said is completely okay, the author might get angry reading this and I want him to, just so he can feel my anger while I was reading this cringe. Nobody asked you to be a noisy nosy aunt here. Now go fetch that stick! Good doggy.

"Come on, let's find a way out of here. Maybe find out what is going on." Devin said smiling over his shoulder before continuing to walk. Sue couldn't make heads or tails of this man, but one thing is for sure. Hopefully he stayed on the side of good.

Dragons Among Heroes

Dragons Among Heroes

Video Games · ArcticRage

poorjoe
poorjoe
4 years ago
Commented

Can anyone recommend quality fanfics like this one???? Legit wanna speed read one :(

poorjoe
poorjoe
4 years ago
Posted

Why do you not use grammarly? Your grammar is really bad, especially in you first few chapters. Please just use grammerly, its free! Also, try to get an editor, use discord to create a community if you have to but please get an editor. Your novel is good but the grammar is making it unbearable to read. I legit want to drop it but only the good reviews of the plot keep me going.

poorjoe
poorjoe
4 years ago
Commented

bro just use the fking grammarly!

Kakashi then go to backyard and after that go to his father room.

Naruto: The Strongest Kakashi

Naruto: The Strongest Kakashi

Anime & Comics · Iampoorguy