Hellfire1985

Hellfire1985

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Hellfire1985
Hellfire1985
5 months ago
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Believe me it’s a good thing to have long chapters so long as they have good detail and can possibly have more than one big event for the chapter

Chapter lengths are all going over 3k words atleast, even when I try to keep it smaller. Don't know if its a good thing or not lol.

Star Wars Rebels: A Gray Tale

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Hellfire1985
Hellfire1985
5 months ago
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Correction your an even bigger one you never disassemble weaponry unless you get something better especially not when you literally have no other ones

Hellfire1985
Hellfire1985
5 months ago
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And let the bad stuff start happening 😁🥲😅

After the fifth or sixth meeting went off without incident, I started to relax. Really relax, for the first time in months. Whatever cosmic threat my subconscious had been screaming about, it seemed to have passed us by entirely.

Star Wars Rebels: A Gray Tale

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Hellfire1985
Hellfire1985
5 months ago
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Flag offf dooommmmmm, I’d immediately realize something was off if he didn’t want it to leave the estate or whatever

"I'm sure," I said, and surprised myself by meaning it. "The nightmares stopped. Whatever was coming, maybe we dodged it. Maybe it was never as bad as I thought. Either way, we can't let fear run our lives forever."

Star Wars Rebels: A Gray Tale

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Hellfire1985
Hellfire1985
5 months ago
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Farting? Do you mean fighting 😂

I sat there, the lingering warmth of her touch mixing with the faint, surreal image of a heroic beetle farting defiantly to the end.

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Hellfire1985
Hellfire1985
5 months ago
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You’ve clearly never been around really attractive women then so quit whining

Then she stretched. Arms overhead. Shirt riding up. Chest straining. Her lekku swayed with the motion, slow and teasing.

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Hellfire1985
Hellfire1985
5 months ago
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Wahhhh bruh I’d stare too and you can’t say you wouldn’t unless your into the same gender

Even worse.She had one foot up on the bench, knee bent, working a bolt. Shorts riding higher. Thighs flexing. The shirt clinging to all the right places, slipping off one shoulder.

Star Wars Rebels: A Gray Tale

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Hellfire1985
Hellfire1985
5 months ago
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Link doesn’t work

Hellfire1985
Hellfire1985
5 months ago
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And by people I mean the authors of these stories. I get the trying to make them seem human and all that, but humans are animals and have protective instincts built into the very psyche of us to protect our friends, family, and offspring.

But never before had he killed another. He had seen death when he was but a child of one, but never had he been the one who raised his hand and dealt the killing blow. Now he had. Yes, it was a troll. Yes, it was not human, but that hardly mattered. He had killed. He felt sick, stained, dirty. Tainted. All he could see was the sight of the troll's head exploding in front of him. All he could feel was the blood and pink fleshy bits of brain matter splashing against his face when he killed the troll who attacking his friends.

Harry Potter: Magical Memories

Harry Potter: Magical Memories

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Hellfire1985
Hellfire1985
5 months ago
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Bruh all these people and the making the main character feel enormous amounts of guilt over protecting those they love is stupid. It’s one thing if it wasn’t in defense of yourself. But to feel guilt over protecting those you care about from certain death. Utter lunacy, especially when the mc made the choice to protect them no matter what.

But never before had he killed another. He had seen death when he was but a child of one, but never had he been the one who raised his hand and dealt the killing blow. Now he had. Yes, it was a troll. Yes, it was not human, but that hardly mattered. He had killed. He felt sick, stained, dirty. Tainted. All he could see was the sight of the troll's head exploding in front of him. All he could feel was the blood and pink fleshy bits of brain matter splashing against his face when he killed the troll who attacking his friends.

Harry Potter: Magical Memories

Harry Potter: Magical Memories

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