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The description of the transformation made my body hurt while I read it, amazing job!

Excited to see some stat changes, very ominous "(Slumbering)"... I can't wait to see what happens with that as he starts cultivating!

I really like that Ashton is the type of character to follow his instincts to help, even when he knows they may put him in danger. Especially since we already know that he is far above average in most aspects of body/mind, and Dean is that much more powerful than he is, seeing the two of them so easily overpowered really lets us see how scary these guys are... I hope Ashton can get revenge someday...

I really like how much worldbuilding the author does in just one chapter! We already know a lot about the sort of world the story takes place in, but the author tells us about the details as the story is moving. It feels exciting because we get right into the action without a long boring epilogue. Looking forward to reading more!