Badges 2
Moments 19
Indeed you have a point. But you missed on several things as well, and as you said; we should understand the full situation first. Yes, it was said that the architecture exuded a sense of extraordinality but it was also specified that it was not as grand as the palace the princess lived in. In addition it was also stated and I quote, "The layout was simple and ordinary"
ch 0 2 A Suspected Hidden Expert
I'm Actually a Cultivation Bigshot
Eastern · Kinoshita Nakui
Critique: TheInquisitor • 10th Chapter Appraisal: Passable • 10th Chapter Characters Appraisal: In need of basic common sense • 10th Chapter World Building Appraisal: As of now, inadequate • 10th Chapter Remarks: As a reader, it is indeed acceptable for a novel's storyline and world building to go out of this world but what I find disappointing is that even the basic common sense was not integrated, just to fit in a certain concept such as "misunderstanding". Few things that I find lacking: - Going to a stranger's house and asking for help - Asking for an "ordinary person" to save someone from a monster - The MC as an "ordinary person" is willing to face a monster, unafraid. - Brushing off the reason why the "Immortal Practitioners" has an utter respect and gratitude to the MC. - People wanting your "draft" that has been in a Trash bin yet not being intrigue by the reason. - The Princess bringing her mother to someone's house when she still doesn't completely know the MC and believing he has all the answer they need. • TheInquisitor's Mandate: There are loopholes but it is a not-so-bad read to pass time.
ch 10 Wanjian Immortal Sect Is In Imminent Danger
I'm Actually a Cultivation Bigshot
Eastern · Kinoshita Nakui
Critique: TheInquisitor • Chapter Appraisal: Passable • Chapter Character/s Appraisal: There's a thin line between Naivety and Stupidity. • Chapter World Building Appraisal: Weird • Chapter Remarks: In this chapter, we are starting to see the "misunderstanding" concept of the novel. The downside is that stories like this tend to be repetitive. MC met a Stranger -> MC accidentally helped -> Stranger misunderstood MC and thought he was an unparalleled expert then completely admired the MC. It is indeed challenging to create different scenarios to introduce new characters but still under the idea of "misunderstanding" and make it not repetitive. I evaluated the character like that because why does she believe that an unknown person can help solve her problem, when she's still unsure whether they are really an expert. Is it naivety or stupidity to enter a complete stranger's home? I appraised the world building weird due to the usage of the term "robot" which seems mismatched with the "Immortal Realm" setting of the novel.
ch 0 2 A Suspected Hidden Expert
I'm Actually a Cultivation Bigshot
Eastern · Kinoshita Nakui
Critique: TheInquisitor • Chapter Appraisal: Acceptable • Chapter Character/s Appraisal: Passable • Chapter World Building Appraisal: Passable • Chapter Remarks: The concept of the novel is one of the emerging genre, wherein the MC transmigrated into an Immortal World and a system taught him "ordinary skills" that for people of that certain Immortal Realm was something "powerful" and "incomprehensible". An example of webnovel similar to this is "It turns out I am a Dao Ancestor". The key difference is that in this novel the MC's system was gone, which could be a good point. Since it diverts from other similar novels, which in turn brings uniqueness and originality.
ch 0 1 Parting with the System
I'm Actually a Cultivation Bigshot
Eastern · Kinoshita Nakui
Critique: TheInquisitor • Chapter Appraisal: Foreseeable Development • Chapter Character/s Appraisal: Typical Arrogant side character. • Chapter World Building Appraisal: Cliché Development • Chapter Remarks: Unsurprised with the flow of plot. As of now, nothing different from other "face-slapping" stories.
ch 0 2 Everyone Has The Nerve To Bully Me?
Museum of Deadly Beasts
Eastern · Diabolical Eggplant
Critique: TheInquisitor • Chapter Appraisal: Passable • Chapter Character/s Appraisal: Passable • Chapter World Building Appraisal: Passable • Chapter Remarks: So far, typical transmigration novel formula where the Original owner was a failure but when the MC transmigrated they obtained a "cheat" that will enable them to surpass old and present generation. The first section of the chapter previews the disdain of people with the original owner's capabilities as a Beast Appraiser. Through that, it gave me a glimpse of possible future plot where, of course, the transmigrated MC will showcase his "Abilities" and shut those people off then gain their "admiration". Typical face-slapping. The latter part then provide us the foreseeable "OP" characteristics of the MC's cheat system. A not surprising occurrence.
ch 0 1 Lin Jin
Museum of Deadly Beasts
Eastern · Diabolical Eggplant
At first i found this novel lame because of how stingy the author is, you have to pay coins already at chapter 11 onwards. And now this, "Die, Devil Saymon" whutt so lame. Could have been better. meh
This book has been deleted.
What on Earth is happening Er Gen? The story and plot is going all over the places.
This evil game of Descend… Wang Baole turned his head and looked at a fair-skinned, beautiful young lady who was probably eighteen to nineteen years old. She wasn't tall and was dressed thinly with her cheeks reddened, and she was looking at Wang Baole with anticipation.
A World Worth Protecting
Eastern · Er Gen
er gen, please don't ruin the story with irrelevant parts. For me, what is happening now is downgrading the storyline. please don't stoop to a level where you need to do fan service *sigh
Under the influence of the waves of heat, Li Wan'er wasn't the only one who made a move. Wang Baole lit the spark… a session of intertwining unfolded naturally…
A World Worth Protecting
Eastern · Er Gen
Idk about you but I prefer the term "my people" than "my subjects". It sounds more humble and down-to-earth. It also gives a sense of respect to the individuals. Yes, the MC is the town ruler but using the term "subjects" makes me feel like the MC thinks he is a higher being and the people are just some objects he can toss when he got bored.
"Make your choice, my subjects. You have two choices here. One choice is to hide behind the shack of Stronghold and die of hunger. The other one is follow my order and guard Border Town till the end to protect your relatives and children. I promise you that if you hold up until the end of Months of Demons, all those who take part in the building of city wall, will be rewarded 25 silver royals. And anyone who sacrifices his life, his family will get a compensation of five gold royals!"
Release That Witch
Fantasy · Second Eye
you're gonna die in an ugly way maggot. You're being a bitch about it because you can't accept your sexuality. Face it coward, you're gay. No need to fear it and just embrace the real you. I'm a woman but I got bigger balls than you.
'He's got a pretty adorable side to him, no?'
Solo Leveling(Only I Level Up)
Urban · 추공 (Chugong)
better shut the fvck up homophobic scum, before I do it myself 🔪
'He's got a pretty adorable side to him, no?'
Solo Leveling(Only I Level Up)
Urban · 추공 (Chugong)
he finally got out of the beast trial so a problem will arise since he have high talents. how to explain his abilities? how to dodge that? of course the author will come up with an excuse 😑. they decided to make the MC's father more of a scumbag and save the mc from getting discovered. that's so....🤐
ch 19 Leaving the Beast Trial
Last Wish System
Fantasy · Alemillach
Read more darling, you need it.
It was a golden card with a blonde lady in a black, maid's costume illustration. She had a voluptuous figure and the costume looked incredibly seductive on her body, especially her cleavage. Although the dress was not revealing, a third of her fair breasts were showing. It was hard to not look at.
Monster Paradise
Eastern · Nuclear Warhead Cooked in Wine