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my thoughts exactly. he specifically triggered the whole situation
Leegaain didn't say or do anything, remaining a spectator as Mogar's prophecy came one step closer to fruition.
Supreme Magus
Fantasy · Legion20
maybe less depending on how long the honeymoon lastet
"Again, yes. Why?"
Supreme Magus
Fantasy · Legion20
should be around 3 months i think
"Again, yes. Why?"
Supreme Magus
Fantasy · Legion20
makes sense, since a day is twice as long as half a day.
A third of the energy influx had been used up in a day. That was more than he anticipated his War Rune to absorb in half a day.
Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!
Fantasy · HideousGrain
when he bought it previously it was compared to work like a boomerang, yes
The Return Arrow dematerialized, returning to Michael's hand where he nocked it on the bowstring once again.
Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!
Fantasy · HideousGrain
Why do we get half a chapter thats literally just a recap from a couple chapters before
The Everlore Association, however, had! During the first month, they launched their own brand of luxury ships. At this time, Void Gates weren't being used and were simply too expensive to deploy, and many hadn't even thought that Wei Wuyin would use them given their heavy costs. They instead resorted to using the fastest Voidships, installing the greatest environments for the limited month of cultivation, targeted toward forces with Chosen or potential Chosen.
Paragon of Sin
Eastern · KevinAscending
this argument is used so often in isekais while never making sense. Did he have Secrets? Yes. But he was him from the start and never someone else.
'The other aliens are thousands of light years away whereas I'm right here. On top of that, Kami has just learned that she has married a person different from the one she knew. I just betrayed her trust and turned her world upside-down in a single swoop.
Supreme Magus
Fantasy · Legion20
that wouldnt push the wordcount though
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Valkyrie Smash
Sci-fi · Nomanalive
so to get this straight he just up and disappeared from his marriage celebration. without any word or explanation whatsoever and we somehow just glance over it. Guess imma drop this soon.
He daydreamed about myriad of things for seven minutes tops before he roused himself to motion once more.
Bored Gamer in Other Worlds
Fantasy · The_Procrastinator
sharp is not an attribute of steel.
"Negative, host. These items are normal creations made out of sharp steel and not imbued with any spiritual essence upon its crafting." Nancy replied.
Bored Gamer in Other Worlds
Fantasy · The_Procrastinator
mate an hour has 60min not 100. so it would even be 12*8
He had read on the internet that the average time taken to audition five hundred people was around 8 hours, so he had come with a lot of patience.
Versatile Superstar: Rise In Hollywood
Fantasy · DreamThree
70km diameter that has to be the absolut ghosttown of a camp with the amount of people on that space.
The distance between the north gate and the south gate of the Baiquan Camp was approximately 70 kilometers long, so with Shangguan Bing Xue's Agility, it wouldn't take her more than a few moments to get there.
Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
Fantasy · XIETIAN
this
"Beautiful elder sister, let us go with you please!" Wen Yun pleaded urgently as she looked at Shangguan Bing Xue with teary eyes.
Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
Fantasy · XIETIAN
yeah those dimensions make no sense at all considering we have starfields which have planets with billions and trilions of people. With that sice it could barely fit 1 of those planets.
Wei Wuyin's strength vastly exceeded his imagination, breaking every belief of cultivation he had in his soul and bringing him all sorts of inferior feelings. Firstly, his Worldly Domain overturned the heavens with a size of 777,000,000 meters, close to 500,000 miles, capable of rivaling the size of a starfield!
Paragon of Sin
Eastern · KevinAscending
can we stay with like either normal measurements or american ones. The back and forth is confusing.
"It's…it's shifting away from the attack? IT CAN MOVE BEYOND WEI WUYIN AS THE EPICENTER?" Since Wei Wuyin was only twenty thousand miles away from him, by estimation, the Worldly Domain's radius should only be 240,000 miles! But it was 300,000 miles out!
Paragon of Sin
Eastern · KevinAscending
Instead of saying "this took a long time to describe". Something like "The whole exchange only took a couple miliseconds" or something along those lines would be much better. You should write thr story and not about you writing the story. That is intrusive and interrupting the flow.
This took a long time to describe but was a disgustingly quick sequence of continuous events. While Bing Tian was on the retreat, Highlord Spiritwalker was still rushing forward. She saw Bing Tian shoot backward, and when she caught a glimpse of Bing Tian's horrific state, her pupils violently shook.
Paragon of Sin
Eastern · KevinAscending
he literally could put a knife through even his friends heart.
'Was he always that strong and fast? And how could he do that without any hesitation…he wasn't scared of them? Is that something I would be able to do too? No, at least not yet. I guess I should be happy that he's on our side.'
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Fantasy · JKSManga