He doesn’t need one he just needs to make better use of his abilities
There was no intelligence on what that ability might be. No records, no whispers in the underworld. But his thoughts told him enough. If the first ability was a rare support-type, healing through blood, then the second was almost certainly offensive.
CLEAVER OF SIN
Fantasy · LORDTEE
why do some people know his real name but others don't
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Rise of The Demon General
Fantasy · UnrivaledArcaner
you don't hold your breath while shooting you breathe naturally and shoot at the peak of your inhale or exhale
Bruno exhaled deeply after firing the shot. Astounding his father once more that he knew to hold his breath while taking aim. With a simple motion, he lifted the bolt up and pulled it back while ejecting the spent cartridge before sending it back to home with a solid push where he repeated the process, once more cutting off his father as he gave voice to his astonishment.
Re: Blood and Iron
War · Zentmeister
Sunny moaned and drew in a raspy, painful breath.
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
...
"What the actual hell?" Mark thought, his mind a tangled mess. The voice continued, unfazed by his internal chaos. "[Class conversion has been applied: Ascendant]," it declared, a metallic echo following each word. A pause, then, "[Initiating host distribution...] [Unique Skill obtained... 'Eternal Gluttony']..."
THE GENERAL'S DISGRACED HEIR
Fantasy · Rene_Tokiori
Such a unique concept
"What the actual hell?" Mark thought, his mind a tangled mess. The voice continued, unfazed by his internal chaos. "[Class conversion has been applied: Ascendant]," it declared, a metallic echo following each word. A pause, then, "[Initiating host distribution...] [Unique Skill obtained... 'Eternal Gluttony']..."
THE GENERAL'S DISGRACED HEIR
Fantasy · Rene_Tokiori
will come back after I get further to see if there are improvements
So far the mc has barely shown a depiction of pride he has been trying lay low until caught and while I like that he isn't one to make stupid decisions off one person saying something him letting people that clearly hate him benefit from him is stupid. The villian tag is blatantly wrong which personally isn't bad if you go in not expecting one. The story development isn't bad but I wish I knew more of what was going on at this point all I know is that he plans to abandon his family so he's not tied into that stuff why no clue from what I've read it seems he would benefit more from staying with them and it's hard to understand his pov if nothing is explained. Also it seems a big part of the story is them dying and starting over but so far I'm not sure if that's gonna happen.....
How is the mc developed i hate when the mc is weak willed just to give room for character development 400 chapters later. He doesn't need to be perfect but he needs to have his own weakness, strengths, morals and stuff that might not be normal.
First to review the next great book by a living legend.
Infinite Slaughter System: I Kill, Therefore I Ascend!
Eastern · Kotario