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“to help her”. Jing is female.

No matter what, it was more important to have someone who was willing to help him.

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This sentence should say “likely” instead of “likeable”

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Dear Author. Thank you for having creating a mostly super great story. I have a bit of feedback at this point: So when is the story going back to Raphael and Harlow? I wish you had created a separate story for Raphael and Rowena, this is too much backstory and not necessary to the plot of the original story. When Rowena threw herself into the river of death, and the king told Raphael that he had a thousand years to find Rowena’s reincarnation, the plot should have gone back to Harlow. Rowena’s birth and upbringing is just not that gripping to me right now. I want to know if Harlow is going to fall in love with Raphael or not. Enough is enough. I am taking a break until you go back to and resolve that loose end. I skipped the last 50 chapters or so because I don’t actually care that much about Rowena, I care about Harlow. You could have easily had Raphael give a summary of the Rowena story to Harlow rather than sending us off into yet another plot line that is confusing me as to how this will all come together. I am ready for this story to end. Seriously. You created the Cursed King to give Maxim a chance to have his own tale be told, the Cursed Princess could have given you the space to share this story without dragging this one out so long. Again, you have quite a bit of talent, which I totally appreciate, but I have spent way more on this story one than any 10 printed fantasy novels, which makes me kinda angry. I feel as though we are being milked to keep spending money with multiple cliff hangers that go into way too many directions and much more background story than is required.

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