“to help her”. Jing is female.
No matter what, it was more important to have someone who was willing to help him.
General · Dreamy Coffee
This sentence should say “likely” instead of “likeable”
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Urban · XiaoMeeHee
Dear XiaoMeeHee, are you ok? I have not seen any new chapters from you in this story in some time. I miss your writing!
ch 968 [Bonus chapter] My Mother?
Urban · XiaoMeeHee
For me to catch up to where you have gotten will cost me almost 27 tokens per chapter. That is way too expensive. So please either declare this novel complete and release the final chapters, or else keep writing. Are you ok? Have you fallen I’l?l
ch 514 [Bonus chapter] Instantly Sisters
Urban · Elise_Elleneth
So is this novel complete? If so, please release the last chapters.if not, then please write more chapters. Thanks for a great story!
ch 514 [Bonus chapter] Instantly Sisters
Urban · Elise_Elleneth
I want to go back to Harlow please. Too many side and background stories here imho.
ch 952 Who Are You, Raphael?
Fantasy · Missrealitybites
I am completThe last time I was tracking this story, Hailey was 8+ months pregnant and An attack wsa made on Vincent while they were on the phone together. Now with Shun, Madison and Levi playing with time and Isabella erasing memories, the whole past was rewritten?!? Twins instead of quadruplets? I am going to have to go back 20 chapters and reread to see if I can figure out where you are going with all of this.
ch 490 What if?
Urban · Elise_Elleneth
Dear Author. Thank you for having creating a mostly super great story. I have a bit of feedback at this point: So when is the story going back to Raphael and Harlow? I wish you had created a separate story for Raphael and Rowena, this is too much backstory and not necessary to the plot of the original story. When Rowena threw herself into the river of death, and the king told Raphael that he had a thousand years to find Rowena’s reincarnation, the plot should have gone back to Harlow. Rowena’s birth and upbringing is just not that gripping to me right now. I want to know if Harlow is going to fall in love with Raphael or not. Enough is enough. I am taking a break until you go back to and resolve that loose end. I skipped the last 50 chapters or so because I don’t actually care that much about Rowena, I care about Harlow. You could have easily had Raphael give a summary of the Rowena story to Harlow rather than sending us off into yet another plot line that is confusing me as to how this will all come together. I am ready for this story to end. Seriously. You created the Cursed King to give Maxim a chance to have his own tale be told, the Cursed Princess could have given you the space to share this story without dragging this one out so long. Again, you have quite a bit of talent, which I totally appreciate, but I have spent way more on this story one than any 10 printed fantasy novels, which makes me kinda angry. I feel as though we are being milked to keep spending money with multiple cliff hangers that go into way too many directions and much more background story than is required.
ch 888 Queen Serena's Anger
Fantasy · Missrealitybites
I am so happy the young ones are reunited with the mom and baby! And, an extra paragraph to explain and conclude the abduction would have been great. I am really enjoying this tale, thank you for creating it and developing it with heart and care.
ch 224 Reunited
Fantasy · Witchhazel
Dear Transcended, please add one last chapter to better wrap up the HEA. What happened to the hero and how did he get out of captivity? A wedding or at least a betrothal would be a great way to end this story. Please!
ch 170 See You Again (The End)
Urban · Transcended
I completely have no idea what happened in this chapter. You completely lost me!
ch 203 203. Two documents
Urban · go_kizy
Is everything ok? There have been no updates in a long time! I hope all is well with you.
ch 1077 It's A Gift
Master's Untamed Wife
Urban · XiaoMeeHee