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The quality of writing is good and neat, but I think it's a bit mediocre. With the addition of more variety of vocabularies, this will be perfect. I love the theme that is unique and different from the usual online novels, so it makes this novel is exciting to read. I'm honestly surprised that it's about alien, thought it will be an usual fantasy genre with magical creatures or something. I gave 4 stars only for world background, because I like more detailed narration on setting. Overall, I love the story, I need to adapt a bit with dirty jokes, but I can handle it. lol! Keep up the good work, Gaasuja! Always love your work!

Gaya bahasanya menarik dan emosi yg mau ditampilkan berasa. Kayak bab 1 yg seru dan bikin kita ikutan tegang juga. Sayang aja bagian dialog di bab 1 masih terlalu kaku buatku dan kadang2 adegannya lompat cepet banget jadi agak bikin bingung. Mgkn maksudnya buat nunjukin kalo bahasa yg dipake bahasa asing kali ya. Overall, ceritanya oke, apalagi penggambaran karakter. Upload yg rajin ya, author! :p

Suka sama gaya bahasanya yang enak dibaca, apalagi bersih dari typo hehe. yang paling aku suka dari cerita ini alurnya cepat dan seru, jadi enak buat dibaca terus-terusan, dijamin gak bakal bosen. latar belakang setting tempatnya aja yg aku kasih bintang 4 karena aku ngerasanya masih kurang digali. Dari segi cerita udh oke banget! Semangat terus, author!