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I really like the characters in this story. Theyre all so distinct, even the triplets, who should be hard to distinguish. The dialogue is great, and i like the simple style you use. It makes all the emotional scenes hit way harder.

I’ve caught up completely on your book, and I have to say, it has the makings to be an all time great story. The characters feel like real people, and they have depth. For example, Mirai. Usually, girl characters are written terribly, but she is very unique and interesting. You can tell that each character has some some kind of story ready to be told. Kenji himself is an amazing main character. He isn’t exactly a good guy, and I like that. I can’y wait to see what happens next.

Nice story hopefully this gets more chapters soon I really enjoyed reading the first chapter keep up the good work and never stop working on this novel