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Thanks for the chapter!! You can insert statistics less, you don't need it so much... and it is very annoying when repeated 3 times a chapter...

I really liked the idea. But the content is very confusing. In chapter 10 or 11, I didn’t even understand what kind of inserts happened.. Make the narrative smoother and the transitions clear. And you don't have to change POV several times in a chapter... The characters could also be better developed. In general, the book has great potential. But for now, this is a very crude story.

Um ... why did the chapters close? I already read 44 ...[img=faceslap]

Author, tell me when there will be progress in the plot? I admit that the riddle is intriguing, but I have already read chapter 40 without understanding the plot ...(ノ｀Д´)ノ彡┻━┻

Finally, at least someone wrote Naruto's transition to the dark side)

Thank you for the chapter!! I will follow a potentially interesting story)

Good luck 😂👍

The idea is interesting in principle, so you can try it. Please do not delete this work.<(_ _)>

When will the new chapter be released? Fan Fiction is very interesting!

Uryayaya, only noticed that in the afternoon there were 2 chapters as there was another one. Author, I adore you[img=recommend]

Thank you so much for the chapter

Просто интересно, откуда Курама научился этому дзюцу?

Maerry, you can tell us how we can discuss the translation to rulate

Yes,+1 Harem I wonder if Yuna is just ignoring Hinata's feelings. Or does he not notice them?

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