Badges 31
Moments 287
No more curse words or we’ll be rated R
"I'm gonna f*cking kill you!" Quinn stated.
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
And now instead of PG, we are PG-13
"I'm gonna f*cking kill you!" Quinn stated.
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
I also suggest some grammatical changes, because I keep hear “a testament to” or “of” and also “our shared passion” which could just be our passion instead. I just feel like you are using filler words and repeating the same phrase over and over in slightly different ways to sound fancy. Don’t get me wrong I really like the story, but, don’t sacrifice content just to sound fancy with every line. After a while it starts to get annoying
ch 522 Chapter 522-In Bed As Always.
The Conquerors Path
Fantasy · Chaosking
Hey man, how many more of these chapters are there, just a number will do. Kinda want to get back into the main part of the story involving Austin because it feels like there is no progression for the last like 18 chapters.
ch 494 Chapter 494-What Are The Girls Up To?(17)
The Conquerors Path
Fantasy · Chaosking
The two girls managing his books I think is this chap’s focus
Luminara POV:
The Conquerors Path
Fantasy · Chaosking
NO!! Not my bois!
"Chris! You can let him go, Peter, thanks for helping me out there." Jim said.
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
'They… threw my blood spear back? Who… who would have the strength to do that?' Quinn thought.
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
Didn’t hikel just pray to immortui?
"I would suggest Hikel, the fourth family leader." Edvard said. "He is a strong leader, and on top of that he was also part of the Punisher's convent. Still, it is best to not reveal yourself to too many people, the more people that know, the more likely your secret is to come out, but these are the reasons for my suggestion."
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
This excites me greatly, quinn forging like tony stark is a great visual to have
'I'm excited for this! Maybe we can absorb all three of the demon tier crystals and make some more bullets. Or I can start teaching you how to forge weapons and create a new set of demon tier weapons!' Alex said excitedly in Quinn's mind.
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
Remember that the true above demon is godslayer
"That Owl… I feel like it wasn't talking to us. Was it talking to you?" Nell asked, looking at Quinn.
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
Death by SNU SNU
"Yeah, sort of, but I am going to go give the women a stern talking to on the Amazon Island. So many problems, but so little of me to go around. I wish I could just use my powers to instantly fix the world, but it doesn't work like that. No one problem is Identical to another, and while some can be solved quickly, there are many that need to be delved into to find the root," I complained and then sighed.
500th Time Reborn, A World Only Known By Women: The Karma System
Fantasy · Magic_
I’ve been thinking that since I heard that Alice’s dad was trying to fix her genes and that she looks like a valkyrie
"The thing he stole, or rather, the one he kidnapped, is the original Nephilim from which all of us were created and our first queen." She said, carefully observing the man's reaction. "We are looking for Frejya."
Valkyrie Smash
Sci-fi · Nomanalive
Hmmmm, I wonder if the facts say that it was Truedream?
"Layla, I'm so sorry," Xander said as he went to her side. "Usually, I don't forget things, but if such a being had done all these things, Don't you think I would know? Besides, I think you got all your facts wrong…"
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
Arthur’s long lost deciple? From an original? Am I missing somthing?
'The Punishers… Could it be a student of Arthur's? Arthur's long-lost disciple? Whatever the case. I look forward to meeting him again because now I have my own questions I would like to ask Quinn Talen.' Edvard thought.
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
This is the start of his villain arc
[Option 2: Absorb the God slayer crystal with the ability of the Altandermite celestial duel blood guns, evolving them to Godslayer weapons. Removing your status as a celestial and becoming a God slayer.]
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
Vampire and descendant
What Quinn meant by this was the strange connection that stopped the two from kissing each other in the past. There was a time when the two of them had made their feelings clear, but the special bond between vampire and familiar made things complicated, and they could never take the next step.
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
You definitely repeat yourself way to much and try to describe things more than needed that often make you repeat yourself more than you need to. But still thanks for the chapter
ch 570 Chapter 570-Slolwy Curbing The Lioness.
The Conquerors Path
Fantasy · Chaosking