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It was a really good read. Started off strong but towards the middle/ end started to feel rushed. It left some loose ends behind.

A great book ties in to the vampire system but only towards the end really in my opinion. I would and do recommend a second reading. Here’s to the next book.

Great book through out only complaint was the getting the names of characters wrong, misspelling words and other grammer issues but nothing really major.

I really like this novel. The amount of detail is crazy and well thought out. That is a couple of reasons that I keep reading. The biggest issue that I have noticed in almost every chapter is the misspelled words and mixing up of different characters names. Neither are bad enough where it pulls away from the story and you can usually figure out what is meant with context clues. Sometimes you just have to make up your own sentence to fit due to the grammer/syntax making it so difficult. With this many characters I completely understand why it is happening and how difficult it must be to keep it all straight. I thought the editor would catch some of these since they’re pretty obvious or a reread of the chapter before submitting would help a lot. Another issue is when the characters have to “act” that’s really bad. I don’t feel like people would/could act that bad unless it was on purpose. So let me say it again. This novel is amazing even with the few issues that it has and I am really enjoying it. Thank you and keep up the great work.

I needed a new novel and this one is amazing. It has a nice flow to it, makes sense, keeps you interested and wanting to read more.[img=update]

Im really hoping this book keeps getting more chapters its really good. The logic is game like and the MC doesnt shy away from it but at the end theyve mentioned throughout the MC was in the military but it seems like the military forgot or didnt look up that fact even though electricity is still working.

The discord Url doesnt work and the writing could use a little bit of refinement with the syntax but the story is great. I can’t wait for more chapters to come out. I wish it was updated more lol.