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Jill_Barnes

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I love romance novels!

2020-08-21 Joined United States

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Thank goodness they’re not related or something! I do not need game of thrones story lines here.

Have you ever looked at Evan closely! Did she remind you of someone? And you! Why is your hair dark when your whole family has golden hair?"

Evil Duke, Please Be Gentle!

Evil Duke, Please Be Gentle!

History · I_am_Creator

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So he’s never thought as her as more than a pet? Earlier it said something like a happier human’s blood tastes better. But I didn’t think that was the only reason he was doing it. I guess i was wrong.

Jael closed the door and touched his head. He was on his last thread and attending to a pet was exhausting especially with the rush of negative emotions he had. However, he knew he couldn't upset her in any way. Keeping her happy would favor him immensely.

The Vampire King's Possession

The Vampire King's Possession

Fantasy · GinaStanley

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Wait what are the three types? There’s opened like Devin and closed like Dylan and then what?

In her experience, there were three kinds of people, some were an open book, eager to share. Devin was an open book. Living around him was to live with the constant threat of blunt force emotional trauma. Dylan, on the other hand, was a closed book. He gave nothing and shutdown conversations that might peek at what was between his covers. Like a steel bear trap clamping down on the conversation, eviscerating an arm of a leg in the process.

MIDNIGHT Bride The CEO's TEMPTATION

MIDNIGHT Bride The CEO's TEMPTATION

Urban · AnnaShannel_Lin

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A good mother always hopes the best for her children.

Though she told herself to be content about what life had given her, she couldn't help but hope that her daughters would be married into a better house condition that what they were in. She had been looking outside the little oval window of the carriage when she heard her elder daughter Beth ask Madeline, her younger daughter,

The Crown's Obsession

The Crown's Obsession

Fantasy · ash_knight17

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How about “their masked faces were close”

Madeline shivered by his words, and as he pulled away from her neck, their face was close with their masks on their face. Her eyes darted from one eye to another, staring back at him and she heard him say,

The Crown's Obsession

The Crown's Obsession

Fantasy · ash_knight17

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Good hint of what’s to come.

"Pity. I was ready to hang him in the scaffold that is in front of the church," said the other male stood with his back and one leg against the wall. Unlike the person who had spoken, this person's face was entirely covered by a silver mask. His black hair was combed back, and his head leaned against the wall with his eyes closed, "Any good meals for the night?" he asked.

The Crown's Obsession

The Crown's Obsession

Fantasy · ash_knight17

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I understand but with nearly every other mention, it brings too much inconsistency. The inconsistency can force the reader to stop and to remember who they’re thinking about. It disrupts the flow.

"My darling Lizbeth… Should I take your silence to mean that my betrothed indeed lied to me and that something exists between you and him? Because I am not one to cause trouble. As such, I can easily have my Father call off my engagement with him so you two can outlive your romantic desires together. Hmpht."

The Dark Lord's Maiden

The Dark Lord's Maiden

Fantasy · Nancy_Jim

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When someone says “it wasn’t just that” doesn’t that imply there is a second reason?

Like many others from the villages and a few towns, Madeline wanted to go to the ball, but her purpose of going was different compared to her sister. Her sister, Beth, wanted to place herself in the highest social standing than live her life here in the village. Madeline was slightly hesitant in going to the shop because it wasn't just Mr. Heathcliff who fancied her. She liked the man, but neither of them had ever spoken about it. The most Madeline had done so far was smile at the man.

The Crown's Obsession

The Crown's Obsession

Fantasy · ash_knight17

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Replied to Queen_Mama

Hilarious gif. Also a great setting up of the characters.

"Oh, hush, Maddie. You don't know how people are going to be swarming in the shop soon to get their clothes tailored or fitted. Knowing a lot of us cannot afford, there is going to be a line when it comes to renting the gowns," said Beth walking along with her sister as they made way to the village's esteemed tailoring shop owned by James Heathcliff, "It's right to take you along as the man fancies you. It would be easy to get our clothes from him. Just because you aren't interested in going to the ball and don't enjoy those things doesn't mean I should too, does it?" her sister let out a hearty laugh.

The Crown's Obsession

The Crown's Obsession

Fantasy · ash_knight17

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Also this is one of my favorite books! Sorry for being a nitpick for a second!

Note: The ML appears more eviler than what you will find in other books. There will be a good side, but it will take time. This is a slow-burn book. 

The Crown's Obsession

The Crown's Obsession

Fantasy · ash_knight17

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He’s right.

In Rikhill, it didn't matter if they were princesses or princes. The late king of Rikhill believed that the veritable treasure he could leave behind once his time come to his children was neither wealth nor title; it was knowledge.

The Tyrant's Pet

The Tyrant's Pet

History · alienfrommars

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