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I couldn't just leave this abomination be. This webnovel is far from anything readable because of it's constant phrasing and conjugation, this is why it hurts my eyes when trying to comprehend the "story". Oh yeah... story, that's another word that is not present at all here. The author just threw some words, sentences and paragraphs together and called it a day. And to top it off the narration just randomly used the "f" word for whatever reason, despite the fact that none of the characters swore. [img=faceslap] I hope my review will help lost people on this beautiful platform, not to open the first chapter.