Demn - Profile

So, usually people write long rants about what they liked and what they didn't like, but I don't like to do that, so I'll be brief: I recommend it. ================ Why is that? ==================== Firstly let's be honest this is the first fanfic of its kind on -tonikaku-kawaii, which means that the author is a pioneer in this regard great respect to him (the author is good that he started writing about it). Departing from the fact that I personally just like -tonikakaku-kawaii, the story is simple it still lacks world design but I think that the author will correct this in the future (now I have read up to chapter 30 and so far there is active character development without going into detail in the world itself). The quality of writing is excellent! In terms of cleanliness of the text the author is very good! =========================== And lastly to get you to read this I drew an illustration that shows the dialogue under the MC and FMC tree (There was a tree right? I just spent 3 hours and didn't reread it drawing an image in my head...). Anyway, the story is cool, read it and give the author 5 stars, because he's awesome!

There are no problems with the quality of writing, the text is very clear, the plot is interesting, and the rest you can find out for yourself.I will not describe all the pros and cons for a long time, I personally enjoyed this fanfic very much. I recommend to read it.

I'll be brief. It's a good fanfic .Why do I think that? Well, for starters: [The characters are integrated into the story quite well. [+]There are no abrupt POV changes that can cause problems when reading (those cases when you don't understand which character is speaking at all and what's going on here, so that's not the case here :)). ) [+]Well there is some good MC character development, he is not an empty shell. [0] The quality of writing is not bad but it could be better in some places, after reading many chapters I realised that in some places the author could make the text cleaner and better, although this is my own personal obsession xD ======================================== It's a shame the chapters don't come out as often as I'd like them to. Overall not a bad story to pass the time I guess.