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I think the drastic change was a terrible mistake. I also dont understand why the author’s sister is now writing the story.

That was beautiful.

Very creative, but please learn to use spell check, and get an editor.

Thus chapter dis a really good job of staying teue to the characters’ natures. Someone definitely wants to change the heirarchy of the wife status and shes not even a wife yet!

That would be a great twist Marry her then send her to fight on his behalf.

Its interesting that both women have a strength that the future King (keeping positive!) really needs in his queen compassion and strategy. So it sounds like the first wife has some learning And growing up to do in order to stay the Only wife and be worthy of that title