Kashieeee

3yr

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Read the new chapters and of course I am absolutely loving the interaction between "us" humans and the other worlders :0 I can't wait!

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Marionette: Lost Soul

Fantasy · WinterOwl21

Kashieeee

3yr

Posted

Latest chapter and I'm full of ants hfdchh SO CUTE AND WHOLESOME I SWEAR THE INTERACTIONS HHDVJUYF I like how you're able to open to our eyes how the world would be if able to interact with supernatural beings and the backstories are great! You could do moreee and also more details is greattt AS LONG as it's relevant to the story omg. Also you could also try adding more details when a character reacts like "he looked away, blushing and hands on his mouth, attempting to hide away the embarassment" and stuff. OVERALL I HOPE TO READ MOREEE

Marionette: Lost Soul

Fantasy · WinterOwl21

Kashieeee

3yr

Commented

Damb this is just wholesome and cute AHAHAHAHA Nuuuuu I'm big sad right now :((

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Marionette: Lost Soul

Fantasy · WinterOwl21

Kashieeee

3yr

Commented

Waaaaahhh I was taken aback when Gabriel said "you liked her" 😂 it was so sudden 😂 do set the mood and/or give more hints that actually speak of those silent feelings 😊

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Marionette: Lost Soul

Fantasy · WinterOwl21

Kashieeee

3yr

Commented

I see you've made changes to perfect your story 😙

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Marionette: Lost Soul

Fantasy · WinterOwl21

Kashieeee

3yr

Commented

OMG WAAAHHHH AND ALSO MORE ENDINGS LIKE THAT THAT LEAVE YOU HANGING AND WANTING FOR MORE

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Marionette: Lost Soul

Fantasy · WinterOwl21

Kashieeee

3yr

Posted

Hai! I've read through everything and all I can say is, I AM ENJOYING THE STORY SO FAR! Continue writing! I'll be leaving more reviews soon that are more detailed 👀

Marionette: Lost Soul

Fantasy · WinterOwl21

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