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their
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I think you were nodding off writing this paragraph 😂
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Rewrite first sentence
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clicked “Accept” didn’t have any other choice
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3’s & 5’s get confusing
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reread & restructure this paragraph
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“second floors height” is confusing
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slowly
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raising
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Choose about or nearly but font use both
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wiped
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“Into the ofZane” ??
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wipe not whip
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what she intends
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no need for 2 “longer” in a sentence
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knew
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with the other
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know better
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too basic
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