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Can’ wait to see how/when Nichol gets his memory back! Drama!!!

Scandalous teenage pregnancy

Putting her well being and sanity before any of his anger or desires proves he is the better man already.

Survival 101. Also, hands down Leland is better!!!

I’m disappointed to see since getting together Sophie’s character hasn’t developed, nor has it retained its’ best qualities. She seemed so strong, smart, witty, independent, and willfull. Now she’s just a wife. We’re missing getting to know the character as an individual.

You DON’T lie to the one you love. Nicholas annoys me.

Leland seems like a more interesting character than Nicholas

Oh boy! Leland is too late. Also if Sophie does end up with him how could she live with the fact that she is already married?

Are there any more chapters?

Wonder why Alex likes Avery so much. Besides her physical beauty

Author, I have been very harsh in my criticisms towards your work. Please understand I would not keep giving them if I didn’t enjoy a lot of what comes out of your creative mind. In this modern age the difficulties of woman are as fervant as they were 1000 yrs ago. If you eish to make your mark on society than perhaps it’s best to connect and understand what society yearns for. Many readers, like me applaud your epic love story, but scorn you for creating a weak female lead. Disdain would decrease if this character were made into a role model for all woman. Strong, independent, intelligent, humorous, cunning, passionate, honest, loyal, empathetic, adventurous, and kind. Now, she is already some of these things, but giving her more depth as a person would make her better, whilst producing a better writer.

Im having a hard time believing Lucian’s brothers were defeated. It was too easy... hmmmmm

Someone should turn this into a movie!!

Wise and powerful

I want to get to know Alex’s siblings more.

Okay well that took a long time to play out... now what?

So strange...

Alex raped her. There was no consent, which means he took advantage of her and this is rightfully a rape. Why does anyone think this is romantic?! That is sick.

Hormones much?!

I don’t t think that was the way to reveal her as his wife Amaya! Good lord! I wonder what Alex’s agenda is for being kund again towards Avery. Oh dear... poor girl.