Marxrexter_llema - Profile

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Bro your novel can't be found when we search for one piece ff's check what went wrong. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Nice really nice. I wish liu guanyi could find not only the martial path he once sought for but something more in the tower apart from it. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

It's getting good. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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I like the system, but I don't like the mc not being able to interfere with the plot a bit too restrictive and being able to return back to earth after the story makes it as though mc is on a trip to one piece where everything is just fantasy and all of the people he met are just characters in a comic. if someone is getting a new life he should die there if not it stops readers from being immersed in the story,it's just like having a harem or being able to eat unlimited devil fruits. it just takes away the pleasure of reading. I just mentioned it as the way you wrote felt like you didn't want the mc to simply get all the girls and stand on top of the world and become a young master who cuts buddha if he stands in his way and cuts devil in his way that kind of protagonist. It's a good read and don't drop.

I am totally okay with you rating it. Remember tom telling franky to love his creations no matter how good or bad it's purpose may serve.....If you don't like what you write then who else should??

Keep going don't drop the story and don't make the character too OP. 😆😆😆 Also please upload one chapter a day if you can keep the same quality, I'd recommend you save some chapters and upload them everyday it helps in revising and editing the chapter before you upload them giving increased quality and steady uploading.😄