1st POV with romance and drama are the best novels
A female lead like Nephis who can actually make decisions of her own were a great idea. A lot of readers don't like the idea of mc getting shadowed but it's only logical since Sunny only trained for 1 year and I believe he will soon catch up to her(although she currently lacks the charm for us to ship Nephis x Sunny; I hope their relationship would progress into lovers so they can rely on each other rather than give and take) Complaints: The pacing could've been shorter so it won't be boring. Character interactions rarely happens and feels off sometimes. I think you should take a break to read your novel and focus on quality over quantity. You may not see this but I hope you take this into heart cause I really like your novel's world background and power scaling - From a random reader who just happened to stumble upon this wonderful masterpiece and unexpectedly came to like it
Fantasy · Guiltythree
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Webnovel
A female lead like Nephis who can actually make decisions of her own were a great idea. A lot of readers don't like the idea of mc getting shadowed but it's only logical since Sunny only trained for 1 year and I believe he will soon catch up to her(although she currently lacks the charm for us to ship Nephis x Sunny; I hope their relationship would progress into lovers so they can rely on each other rather than give and take) Complaints: The pacing could've been shorter so it won't be boring. Character interactions rarely happens and feels off sometimes. I think you should take a break to read your novel and focus on quality over quantity. You may not see this but I hope you take this into heart cause I really like your novel's world background and power scaling - From a random reader who just happened to stumble upon this wonderful masterpiece and unexpectedly came to like it
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree