Webnovel Author: paw_meh - Novel Collection

Hello, (Not the original author) Okay, let me start with a brief on the book. Without giving out too much, basically the fl is the former villainess. The chapters I’ve read so far are all about the villainess falling in love with someone other than the male lead. This is basically the villainess and male second trope. It’s bxg 1v1. Now what i find refreshing is that the male lead isn’t your typical overly possessive type. In fact, his entire identity is shrouded in mystery but you’ll see that for yourself. It’s a simple read, not really steamy, no misunderstandings. And a whole lot of insulting each other. This is supposed to be a quick transmigration of over 1000 chapters but the author is sceptical about it so it may end up being roughly 100 or 70. Lastly. I had been in short contact with the author who had previously deleted her work for specific reasons. So literally, they just want to give it to those who want to read it. So they have deleted their work on all previous sights and it will only be available on my page along with any other miscellaneous works they may come up with. Ask any questions and give any feedback. Otherwise, bye!!!

Personally, I don’t like it. Why? 1. The fl goes back to 16 and the guy she’s with is already commanding a military. Realistically speaking, this guy would be in late thirties. But for the sake of the novel, you can say his mid 20s yeah, as a young genius or whatever. But HE IS STILL LEGAL. Like what the f*** can’t these guys just make her 20. 2. I’m tired of these stories. So everyone is doing these things to the fl for nothing? She’s completely victimized to the extent that she victimized herself. Like seriously, she experimented on herself, then she blamed her love for a man for it. 3. That sulphuric acid on the face thing- like what the actual f***! For real, they could have used an open fire, she would have higher chances of surviving and going to catch her cheating boyfriend. But no, they had to use acid. There’s just a little fact they forgot, this acid poured so close to the important organs would kill her sooner. Acid doesn’t stop, it continues to corrode skin and bone until completely diffused. In fact, the pain of it wouldn’t even let her think. She would probably die immediately. But overall, the pattern of the story is over used and this reader doesn’t like victimized fl’s. I dropped it

I, for one, like the review. I was just starting to read this book when I saw “small 16 year old body” like wtf! And I immediately came to the reviews to see exactly what I should expect. I’m not about to read a story about pedophilia. I can’t believe you’d ask anyone to support such an idea in the name of showing positivity towards the author’s work. Should people continue writing about r*** and we pass it off as right in the name of support? Bro man, you must be twisted inside? Like, your logic might resemble that if the fl of this book. And you should know, even if people leave a bad review on a book, as long as I like the first few chapters, I’ll keep reading it. The reason I come to reviews is because the book doesn’t seem too good and I want to know whether or not it will waste my time and piss me off. If you want to encourage the author, leave as many positive reviews as you want (no one will call you out except when you support pedophilia). Emoji’s don’t help anyone gain interest in the book either (at least not me). In the meantime, I want to know exactly what’s happening in the book, not your positivity, so give me a helpful opinion in a review. No hard feeling dude. Stop calling people that can leave behind an honest opinion jerks. So what now? If someone is an asshole, people shouldn’t call them that?

Everyone else is talking about repetition but they are forgetting the real problem yeah! The story is—- Well, you don’t need to have average IQ for it, yeah!! The storyline is below basic. I started reading because I don’t like over complicated plots yeah. But the reactions of the FL when she meets the cheating couple are literally st**pid. Not only that, the conversations between the ml and fl are uncoordinated. The ml says really absurd things and not in a good way. The author should work on her writing style. Let the characters go through the events and their emotions be exposed. The grammar, normally I’d ignore but I just can’t get over the continuous use of idoit instead of idiot. Also breath where breathe should be and breathe where breath should be. There’s also thier instead of their. And these are the ones that are often seen. The author badly needs an editor. I’m not encouraged to read further than I already have. But good luck

I’ve given author a five star rating. Please reach 300 chapters and 5 arcs soon! [img=update][img=recommend]. I’m posting a review for the first 9 chapters and will be posting one after 50 chapters next. So far, there isn’t much I can tell about the characters or where the plot is going. But with how they are written (and the very rare errors), I’m hopeful. It’s hard to come across a villainess that isn’t an undercover female lead or a psycho female lead, who was done wrong in one way or the other and must seek retribution. In fact, so far, I can’t find a single reason to side with the protagonist. But I really want to see where this is going.