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Thank god I stopped this before it turned into something I won't even describe, thanks

Then why does author says only lesb action, too much drama rather drop

Damn, I really am conflicted right now so many people against it and the one who wrote the story says that it was only between girls and I guess that the girls are in the harem? so should I really just run?

I don't understand what's the deal with the others if it's between girls of the harem done willingly between them with him being aware of it?

Nice going, then if for this one you do change the point I showed into something more natural with her not loosing memories and them developing their relationship steadily it would be great and please let me know when you do so, it's better to fix some point early on in the story rather than write and come back later to fix so a tip would be that when you start writing chaps for this one again you “overhaul” before continuing it

Nice to see a author interacting with readers, are you planning to change or will you let it be?

It was only my opinion, for example your mha fanfic is dope for now and I don't see any problem with it, it's just that I expected too much from this one since avatar fanfic is rare but it was only that part I told you about that ruined it for me could have been handled better and still can be if slightly changed

This is only my opinion, so at first I was extremely hopeful for this but in the end it didn't go the way I hoped it would, for example it went downhill at the part with his motheer I don't like the relationship you made them have it feels forced and too fake I had so much expectations for her that it destroyed most of the enjoyment, I hoped to see her with her memories trying to redeem herself by working extra hard and being by his side and slowly see him as a man and falling for him slowly would have been so much better

Can someone reply? I actually was waiting for chapter to pile up and only saw now that it ended but then I saw some review about ntr and wanted to know what's the deal? like is ciri or someone else forced into something? who he end with ? and is it really ntr or is it girl of his harem having *** between them? depending on the answer I'll know whether to continue or not this

Author, you didn't one of the review so I'm wondering what happen with his wife ? I don't want to start this story depending on it so could you please clarify ?