Jim_Langan - Profile

interesting story. thank you

yes I am sorry about this also

while I don't usually have a great interest in vampire novels I do find the storyline interesting.

facinating

yes Peter had a choice. be tortured now, or later. what is wrong with this place. why not just hold human sacrifices and be done with it.

well, alone on a deserted planet, interesting story

a few more open chapters would be nice

interesting story, .I agree with others commenting that the chapters could be longer. curious where the storyline is going.