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You go girl! 😄

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The Unfortunate...Or not?

Fantasy · Scarlett_Witch

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thanks luv

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Winter's Bound

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😂 wth??

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thank you so much ❤❤

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I just read the first chapter. Maybe you can work on grammar and all, other than that I love the story. You can put in a little work on the pacing and speed of the story. because a lot happened in the first chapter itself. And if you could add something which grabs the reader's attention, that would be great. Overall, I loved this story. Keep going [img=recommend]

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