Webnovel Author: Aevitas - Novel Collection

Shameless first review. I hope to have fun with this novel, so I hope everyone reading will have fun as well <3

I have only read 9 chapters, I could not force myself to read any further. This review won't reflect the series as a whole, just what I could stomach. The translation quality is barely above machine translation level, making it very jarring to read Even if somehow you look past the translation, the framing of all the scenes is awful. Things happen with no explanation, perspectives shift out of nowhere, and it goes back and forth between present and past tense constantly. It is really hard to concentrate on the story. That leads to the final point, the story. The story is nothing special, pretty much just cookie-cutter cliche Chinese characters with as much depth as a speed bump. Cliches aren’t bad, and are often enjoyable, but not when cliches are literally every part of the story. Final statement: Don’t bother reading unless you have nothing better to do, and even then think twice.

It has an interesting premise, but to be honest, is kind of boring. Up till chapter 5 at least not much happens. The dialogue comes off to me as a little bit cringey, and it made it hard to read.

Steven universe is cool, hope your work does well.

I recommend using grammarly, its free and helps a lot. It catches all the mistakes for you.

Other than a few grammatical and spelling errors here and there it was really well written. It has a story I find interesting and I hope it does well.

This is really good! It reminds me a lot like Death Parade, one of my favorite anime. The writing quality is a lot better than most I see on this site as well.

It's cool, just needs a bit of work here and there on grammar. Sometimes the paragraphs are way too long, making it a bit clunky to read as well. I'd recommend grammarly, it works wonders.

It has an interesting premise with the mc being a deal with the devil type character. The cover art looks amazing as well. The only problem I had with it was the grammar making it a bit hard to read.

The premise is really cool! It feels a lot like the discord for webnovel and amuses me greatly. It's a bit hard to read due to the grammar but I like it overall.

It was a bit too dramatic for my taste, but I don't really read romance novels personally. Overall it is cool.

Shameless self review, its not perfect but I'll be writing what I would want in a VRMMORPG. I hope you check it out.

Writing Quality: 3/5 The grammar needs a lot of work, it was barely readable. Story Development: 3/5 It was kind of all over the place, couldn't really tell what was going on half the time. Character Design: 4/5 The characters are fine, a bit hard to understand at times due to the grammar. World Background: 3/5 Generic from what I saw, didn't really get to see much.

*Uno Reverse* I only have one word for this novel, one word only. Are you curious about my one word too? Why so curious? Stop reading to find out my one word man. Omg, please stop being so curious. Curiosity will kill the cat, don't you know this. Fine, seeing how you're so desperate to know my one word. It's collection. What's collection? Obviously, it's adding this novel to your library fool.

The grammar and spelling is kind of all over the place, but I am guessing that is due to being new to English. It is difficult to learn English grammar, but using something like Grammarly or just Google docs can greatly help in that department. Otherwise the story is pretty generic, Orphan girl is bullied by the rich popular person. There hasn't been much development so far.

The story has a pretty generic Cinderella type story, but it is executed extremely well. Definitely the start to one of the best romance novels on webnovel if the quality stays the same.