Aevitas

Aevitas

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Hello! I write fantasy n stuff. Enjoy ^.^

2020-08-25 Joined United States
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3 months ago
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I like how descriptive the novel is, keep up the good work author, I hope to see many more chapter in the future!

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3 months ago
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Keep up the good work! This novel is very descriptive in its scenes, which I find is very important in setting the mood of the scenes. I am not very familiar with romance novels, but the mood I can only imagine is very important.

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3 months ago
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I am always a fan of clone-based powers; it is an underrated power type, and I am glad to see it being utilized in this story. Keep up the good work!

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3 months ago
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I always like a good regression story. I look forward to reading more about what Kairos will do with his newfound life. Give it a read if you like these types of stories.

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3 months ago
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It does what you would expect well. You're getting exactly what the title delivers. Definitely give it a read.

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1 years ago
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Shameless self-review. I hope to write an interesting story that you all will enjoy. If you want to see more then drop a review or a collection <3

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1 years ago
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It is an interesting mystery novel. I am curious to see in the future if Quasar actually saw god or is just schizophrenic. Will he escape from the psych ward he is in, or will he be released for some reason? Looking forward to more chapters

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3 years ago
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Shameless first review. I hope to have fun with this novel, so I hope everyone reading will have fun as well <3

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4 years ago
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I have only read 9 chapters, I could not force myself to read any further. This review won't reflect the series as a whole, just what I could stomach. The translation quality is barely above machine translation level, making it very jarring to read Even if somehow you look past the translation, the framing of all the scenes is awful. Things happen with no explanation, perspectives shift out of nowhere, and it goes back and forth between present and past tense constantly. It is really hard to concentrate on the story. That leads to the final point, the story. The story is nothing special, pretty much just cookie-cutter cliche Chinese characters with as much depth as a speed bump. Cliches aren’t bad, and are often enjoyable, but not when cliches are literally every part of the story. Final statement: Don’t bother reading unless you have nothing better to do, and even then think twice.

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4 years ago
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It has an interesting premise, but to be honest, is kind of boring. Up till chapter 5 at least not much happens. The dialogue comes off to me as a little bit cringey, and it made it hard to read.

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