DracoWolf20 - Profile

I like the story but it does have strong down sides. The inability to get the names right or even to keep them the same inside a same chapter is confusing and a sign of shoddy editing. I mean some change 3 times in a couple of paragraphs, it’s not difficult to go back and clearly change the names and it would massively improve coherence. Overall, like the story but need proper editing.

I loved the fact that he didn’t get the system till he already made something of himself, that he’s not going one quest to another like many #system novels. Another thing I like is that I find a lot of the bit organic not totally far fetched. Though making a spy organisation for Hollywood was a laugh. It’s a good read though wish I’d been going longer to have more chapters.

Love the original and this accompanies it nicely Wish there were regular updates because the RAWs are crap