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If your wondering why the review only has two of the sections filled out that are not in the middle its because I didn’t read the story. The reason you ask. Well the first chapter of the actual story is locked and I like many others am not going to waste my coins and fast passes on a story I can’t preview. My advice would be to open some free chapters and let people get a feel for it before you start charging them.

One of the better books on this site for sure. the MC actually has some substance to him and the world building is one of the best in this type of novel. And the plot extends beyond that of just offending the young master of a clan deafeating them and then repeat with a stronger clan/background. The only major issue I see is the grammar, more specifically tenses and work choice. The one that stands out the most is when the word more is used wrong such as when you said “more faster” or other instances like this other than this great book.👍