Good story and Im getting sucked in. But, can you please stop using “best friend” att the time when referring to Andi. Use her name or just frIend, but it Is unnecessary to use best friend all the time.
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Urban · CailinMatthews
ThIs books story is very good, but the terrible grammer and poor spelling was a distraction. All word processing programs have a grammer and spelling check function, it should be used! If you can get past the consistent overuse of the same phrases, poor grammer, bad spelling and lack of knowledge or reseache of careers that the main characters have, the story itself is good.
Urban · Nur_Athirah_8411
Pretty good story but terrible grammer!! If you’re going to write a book, at least use proper grammer and spelling.
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Good story and Im getting sucked in. But, can you please stop using “best friend” att the time when referring to Andi. Use her name or just frIend, but it Is unnecessary to use best friend all the time.
ch 31 CH 30: Commence Eh-Vree-Yan
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Urban · CailinMatthews