Okay, got it! Thanks for clarifying. Will check it out immediately!
ch 13 "We will keep you like a gold"
Fantasy · Ninestar619_5803
Now this is a little confusing. From the first two chapters, it is abundantly clear that the MC Eden knew of the Chains of Dedra, which from this chapter has something to do with torture and the release of a super powerful dude. So, if MC Eden travelled back in time, how did he not know the existence of these three men who are out to capture him? Hmmm....
ch 13 "We will keep you like a gold"
Fantasy · Ninestar619_5803
fired.... what kind of a name is it? Wouldnt it be confusing if someone says 'HEY, YOU'RE FIRED!' Is he stating the obvious, i.e., his name or is he firing him from his job?
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Fantasy · Ninestar619_5803
So an unknown entity gifted the system to MC and the system is gifting something else to the MC. Sounds like a good deal to me. Where can I get such a system?
[AS A START, THE SYSTEM WILL ALSO GIFT YOU WITH A SPECIAL RARE ELEMENT]
Fantasy · Ninestar619_5803
So... who gifted the system to MC? A god?
[YOU HAVE BEEN GIFTED WITH A SYSTEM ON THE OCCASION OF THIS SPECIAL DAY]
Fantasy · Ninestar619_5803
A system actually wishing the MC happy birthday. This is a joke, right? How can there be such a good system? I must be dreaming....
[HAPPY BIRTHDAY HOST! HOST NAMED: EDEN LOCKER]
Fantasy · Ninestar619_5803
Gate to Golden Bridge... that's quite a name alright. I like it!
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Fantasy · Ninestar619_5803
Wow... a protagonist ordering a system. Did I wake up on the wrong side of bed?
"SYSTEM! I BEG YOU! CONSUME ALL MY MANA AND TAKE ME BACK IN TIME! TAKE ME BACK TO LEVEL ZERO! I ORDER YOU!"
Fantasy · Ninestar619_5803
gotcha
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History · SoniiNaaz
Awesome chapter! So cool. Hope to see more!
ch 0 2 Talking To The Moon
Fantasy · NyxReveuse
Wow... such cruelty. Being called a fairy isnt that bad so why this reaction? Strange....
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Fantasy · NyxReveuse
Thank you author-san.
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Fantasy · NyxReveuse
Awesome start author-san. got me hooked with just the first three chapters. I liked mey's character the most. So cheerful,so honest to herself, dayum I wish I was this honest with myself. I also liked the mc fenhua and the others. waiting to see more. also just a pet peeve of mine but please don't write country z and city j. I like countries and wish to travel the world if I can so seeing country z and city j just... breaks my heart.
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Please not country z again... where are all the cool countries?... 😔😔😔😔
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Awesome story, author-san! Was hooked right from the beginning. When I finished it, I really craved for more. I was also a little peeved that there werent any more chapters. I would definitely support this novel to the end, author-san. Anyway, the plot was awesome and deep research had went into making it. A huge winner in my book. The background was so cool and they were defined so perfectly. The side-characters were truly alive and I wish you would flesh them out more. All of this differentiates this book from the thousands of others. This is definitely going to succeed. I'm betting on it, author-san.
Seven Layers of Hell
Fantasy · Kamelzy1