Pretty good novel, although I still don't really get the scenery of the world I am in. All I could do was assume it was London in the 1800s which doesn't really make much sense. Besides that, keep up the good work!
A nice story and quite a slight twist on the isekai genre. Although there are some info-dumping once in a while, it's not really enough to make you drop it. Good job!
Pretty good for a romance novel. However, I do sometimes get confused on whose perspective I am on, but besides that, this novel is good. Keep up the good work!
Great title and also very intriguing indeed! Looking forward to seeing more! And I hope you get to finish your novel! Good luck to the author!
Why? Thank you, kind sir, for your review.
Why, hello readers. Blue Crow here... Wonder how I got my name? That's something you will find out later. However, I'm not here for petty introductions. Just here to announce that the entire first volume has been finished and will go under peer-editing so anyone who wants to read it without having to wait for the next day can start binging on it. Well, I wouldn't recommend that behavior for the second one though... I will accept any criticism as long as you say it nicely (even a bird of deception like me have feelings too, you know) Well... I should go now... I need to make sure Father didn't mess up the laws of creation again... Toodles...
Nice story! I wouldn't say it is one of the best, but it surely is one of the good ones. For now, I will give it 5 stars, but it really depends on how the story goes, doesn't it?
You made excellent use of grammar and suspense which really intrigues me. However, I can't make an accurate review on this due to it only having one chapter. Maybe once it has four chapters, then I will return. For now, this is my score.
Although the rhythm in the first few chapters were especially enough to make me skim-read most of the time, it is still an interesting story. However... the characters do sometimes feel kinda robotic, but overall, it's a great novel! I love how much you improve in the later chapters. Continue the good work!
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original World Dream Experiment
Mashiro Hiro suddenly found himself in another world with his classmates. Not only that, the world is the world of the VRMMORPG Omnipossibilia. And since he's the main character, he gets to be the OP Hero. Unfortunately, he's in a world filled with overpowered people, some even stronger than him. His mission to save Gaia won't be easy. Lumiere D. Hyacinth, named after his father's childhood hero from some storybook he read, had always wanted to be a pirate, mostly because his father told him that pirates are the embodiment of freedom and fun. Follow his misadventures as he meets new friends and experiences. Updated every two days at least. Hopefully, daily. Cover sucks. I know. I am sorry for my lack of artistic talent. This will only be continued until the end of WFP. Please check out the full version here: https://www.webnovel.com/book/world-dream_184247507067676059 Chs 1 Collections
Oh... that part... I'm sorry for the confusion. It was actually intentional since Athos was using her real voice that time. However, thanks for notifying me so I could edit the chapter to make it less confusing. :)
World Dream
Fantasy · Blue_Crow