Dupe Chap
ch 903 Snatching the Wristwatch (Part 1)
Fantasy · Overlord_Venus
Part of the chap is duplicate
ch 693 Giving Chase
Fantasy · Overlord_Venus
duplicate chap
ch 682 Subverting Your Expectations
Fantasy · Overlord_Venus
A small typo: you said "marrow" insteas of "arrow" when talking aboht arnak's bow and arrow
ch 639 In My Past (Part 4)
Fantasy · Overlord_Venus
Says felt asleep, rather than fell asleep
ch 166 A Blade of Grass
Fantasy · Overlord_Venus
A good ending. Looking forward to what might appear in the third arc.
ch 230 Departure
Fantasy · Eveofchaos
Don't worry about the chapters before or during the break. A break means you don't do work.
ch 202 Mana Control
Fantasy · Eveofchaos
Manohar being brilliantly funny as always
ch 1452 Endless Training (Part 2)
Fantasy · Legion20
A changing cover could be really cool to see!
ch 115 Ice
Fantasy · Eveofchaos
Taking it slow and showing the mindset can be just as important as conflict. Khan isn't a robot, he has feelings and thoughts and by sharing them, we become more invested and interested in the story as we grow closer to the characters and understand them better.
ch 111 Interactions
Fantasy · Eveofchaos
Near the end you wrote George instead of Paul when they are speaking.
ch 101 Blanket
Fantasy · Eveofchaos
Poor Martha. Wonder if she's ever going to get that favour paid back
ch 93 Honesty
Fantasy · Eveofchaos
The last 3 paragraphs are repeated
ch 534 Spirit
Chaos' Heir
Fantasy · Eveofchaos