Correction: *presice! you had a . after the !
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Correction: *then to the right
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Correction: *got him to face
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This book uses clichés in a good way that makes it more unique from it's competition and counter parts. It uses what's already made to flip it and make it different but similar to, and from, others. It has a little bit of comedy and is balanced pretty well. I instantly got hooked into it. So yeah, if you're a new reader then just give it a read. You don't have to listen to me buuut.....i'm sure you'd want to read it.
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There are only a few grammar issues, but overall the English grammar is really good!! The story was built pretty well. It was easy to get into the story. The character design was alright and the story development was pretty good. Overall i like the premis of it. Keep it up!
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