Webnovel Author: Ash_Striker - Novel Collection

That's another thing that needs to be clarified..

(This review is only of chapters 1-4.) The author has good grammar and spelling. The writing is clear and simple. There are some descriptions, but I feel like the author could go into more detail of what exactly the hybrids look like. At one point, I thought the wolf was picking up something with their hand, when they were actually using their mouth. There is a little development of the world given to us in each chapter, but we don't have a clear picture of the inter-workings of this world yet.I definitely see the creativity with the enemies the hybrid and his mother encounter. Because it is only the first few chapters, I did cut the author a break with the world-building, but I anticipate that a lot more will be revealed later. I like that bits and pieces are given to us instead of boring exposition about the world all at once. As for the plot, I'm not sure where it's going. The plot right now doesn't seem to be flowing well. The actions of the character are questionable too. I wish we could have seen more of the battle between the mother and the plant, and that her son would have joined, even if he wasn't strong enough. I don't understand how he can just stand back and watch his mother get attacked. It also ruins the anticipation and excitement because I expect that the mother will win, since the focus isn't on her. I also think that the encounter of the spirit could have happened later. The plot is too clunky with two big events happening at once. As for the characters, I haven't gotten a real sense of who they are. I don't really know what their personalities are like yet and so I don't really care for them. The plot is intriguing, but that can only hold people's attention for so long, you have to develop the characters enough so we can care about them. Overall, a decent story so far with potential. I wish the author well and hope the best for their story.

(This review is only of chapters one and two, which was what was written on the date of this review.) This story is gripping, enticing and action-packed. The plot has good pacing, and slows down to develop the characters, but also speeds up for the exciting bits and to create a feeling of urgency. The characters are well-rounded and likable and their actions are true to themselves. Because it is only the first couple chapters, there are still some unanswered questions about the characters' pasts and how they come to be in their circumstances, but we can clearly tell who they are as people. While we aren't given much insight to how this society works, we are given some insights to what their world is like in a simple way. The monsters in this story are also very original and creative, which I did give extra points for. The existence of these monsters and why the majority of the popular doesn't really seem to be aware of their existence has not yet been explained. I would also like to know more about where exactly they live and how it's run, what form of government they have, etc. The descriptions in this story are top-notch and it's easy to visualize. The story is well-written and there are hardly any grammar errors. Although the chapters seem long for webnovel, this story will keep you excited enough to finish the chapter and leave you wanting more! Overall, a very strong start so far. I would recommend for anyone looking for a fantasy action story to check it out. Once this story is completed and I read it till the end, I will write another review that will cover the whole story.