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2020-08-27 Joined Global

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this whole paragraph is redundant

Marcus spent a great amount of time lamenting about his future decision on whether to continue staying balanced with his stats or pushing everything he has into magic.

Transmigrated as a Ghost

Transmigrated as a Ghost

Fantasy · MegaC

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Commented

earlier when he evolved you stated his recovery rate went up so it should no longer be this low

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I need more!!!!!!!!

ch 29 CHAPTER TWENTY-NINE : THE LABYRINTH

The Black Tome

The Black Tome

Fantasy · AxlesOfFate

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remove one of the unable to

As this was said, all of these students turned silent. For a few moments, they were unable to unable to process this plan.

Versatile Mage

Versatile Mage

Fantasy · Chaos (Fish's Sky)

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remove the "the" in the section slower than (the) that of the car

The Wind Element’s skill seems good. This movement speed was not any slower than the that of a car. It’s just Zhang Xiaohou hasn’t met the standards; thus, he didn’t know how to pull over and stop.

Versatile Mage

Versatile Mage

Fantasy · Chaos (Fish's Sky)

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no need for 2 was

The grass was was swaying wildly and the dirt particles were flying everywhere. The girls covered and held their skirts down as they let out astonished cries.

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Versatile Mage

Fantasy · Chaos (Fish's Sky)

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