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hoh, free training dummy!
Although it looked like I was struggling, I really wasn't. Since I decided to hide my main sword art, I decided to use this time to get familiar with my second sword art. [Ring of vindication]
The Author's POV
Fantasy · Entrail_JI
mf got him with THE SCABBARD its flexing time
Capitalizing on the opening, without skipping a beat, using the scabbard of the sword I hit him in the face and the sound of something breaking resounded across the arena.
The Author's POV
Fantasy · Entrail_JI
just in case
If videos of our fight were to be exposed to the world to see, though unlikely, there was bound to be someone out there who would be able to recognize what sword art I practiced.
The Author's POV
Fantasy · Entrail_JI
YES
...I made up my mind to absolutely destroy and humiliate him in front of everyone present.
The Author's POV
Fantasy · Entrail_JI
Diamond*
Because apart from the Northern district, every other district was under the jurisdiction of one of the four Diamon graded guilds present in Ashton city.
The Author's POV
Fantasy · Entrail_JI
lol
I didn't think too much about it before, but, under the influence of [Monarch's indifference], it felt as if my body was being controlled by someone other than me...It felt as if I was under the depths of the sea and my body was moving on its own.
The Author's POV
Fantasy · Entrail_JI
woooo, Monarch's Indifference!
No, rather than trance, it was more like I was starting to be able to predict them. In this monotonous world... Everything felt bland. And as I delved deeply into Alexander's mind, I could see that Luxon's movements were similar to his.
Advent of the Three Calamities
Fantasy · Entrail_JI
But can they put up a fight against the godly G-rank charm?
He immediately grabbed the attention of the room with his presence. With looks that put even the best-looking actor to shame, he became the focal point of everyone's gaze.
Advent of the Three Calamities
Fantasy · Entrail_JI
"as if" true mc vibes right there, he even has the developed 6th sense
- Jan and Louise's rivalry began when Jan first joined the Prep Academy for Heroes. He accidentally bumped into Valencia, and Louise defended her fiercely. Thanks to Valencia's intervention, a fight was narrowly avoided, but ever since then, Louise has harboured a strong hate for Jan as he was way too good at everything as if he was reincarnated from another world.
The Transmigrated Author
Fantasy · zowji
But this one leans more towards effort.
In contrast, Louise was the heir to the weapon known as the Flaming Terror. Blessed with the purest fire attribute and exceptional physical strength, he never missed a day of training or study in his life.
The Transmigrated Author
Fantasy · zowji
Blessed by the gods, I suppose.
While Jan possessed an adaptive ability greater than any other person on Earth, allowing him to learn things with a single glance, he was perfect in every way. His mana reserves seemed bottomless, and his swordsmanship matched that of the sword saints.
The Transmigrated Author
Fantasy · zowji
i doubt the " at the beginning should be there...?
"I grabbed the wrist of the hand that was holding me with my right hand and gave Louise a serious look. 'Let go, Louise,' I said as I began applying pressure slowly.
The Transmigrated Author
Fantasy · zowji
and the rival, too
Suddenly, a force pushed me back, and I found myself eye-to-eye with someone who I didn't quite understand—Louise De Valerion. He and his lackeys stared at me with an intimidating intent.
The Transmigrated Author
Fantasy · zowji
valencia? the gf in the original novel?
In the middle of the crowd, I spotted the friends I made at Heroes Prep Academy—Camilia, Valencia, Bazz, and Lyra. Excitement welled up within me, and I shouted, "Yo, guys!" waving my hands through the bustling crowd.
The Transmigrated Author
Fantasy · zowji
might be missing a comma and "as" (connector) here, too. "her voice shaky but sincere, as she bowed her head in thanks." (?)
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The Transmigrated Author
Fantasy · zowji
and furfill? (i might be tripping here)
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The Transmigrated Author
Fantasy · zowji
shouldnt it be leveled?
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The Transmigrated Author
Fantasy · zowji
chase me--
[.....Please welcome, Dream Catcher.]
Advent of the Three Calamities
Fantasy · Entrail_JI