it is a story with great potential, but because of the grammar errors and how it is written, it makes it hard to understand what is being said. if it is able to be edited and redone to an extent, it would be a pretty decent novel .
Fantasy · Lruska
it had a good start but then he got a "friend" who was talking shit and was completely useless that started fights he couldn't take. absolutely stupid.
Games · UnrivaledArcaner
racist mc [img=disgusted][img=proud][img=disgusted][img=disgusted]
Fantasy · One Punch Cute King
mc is really dumb and boring imo. it was off to a good start but mc really turned it off for me
Fantasy · lifesketcher
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Fantasy · Victor_Weismann
[img=Out of it][img=Why][img=Why][img=Out of it]
Fantasy · HotIce
not bad but not good, either. [img=Why][img=exp]
wasn't good and mc is incredibly stupid [img=faceslap]
Fantasy · DXHaseoXD
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Eastern · KevinAscending
it was a good read and would read it again but the story was lacking a little .[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Eastern · MotivatedSloth
This is really good. I loved the art and storyline was also good [img=coins][img=update][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=recommend][img=fp][img=coins]
· DUBU (REDICE STUDIO), Chugong, h-goon
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it is a story with great potential, but because of the grammar errors and how it is written, it makes it hard to understand what is being said. if it is able to be edited and redone to an extent, it would be a pretty decent novel .
Rise of the White Dragon
Fantasy · Lruska