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The guy fainted and as I held his chest, his heartbeat was gone. I ate the skin, consuming it, and wiped my mouth as I ran to the far back of the school.

Sociopathic's Lover

Horror · ASG_Official

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3yr

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it felt not as a story, but imagination. keep up the good work.

ch 0 6 The Hunting

Amnesia: Ashkron

Fantasy · Zerius123

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3yr

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i like this chapter.

ch 0 5 Antagonist & Snow

Amnesia: Ashkron

Fantasy · Zerius123

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3yr

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I am satisfied. The amounts of detail into it, Anime Style Comedy, just everything is perfect. the character design is out standing, world background was very informative, not too complicated nor too less, the quality was splendid, stability of updates are good and story development, its going great. I hope to see some new stuff here and there.

Amnesia: Ashkron

Fantasy · Zerius123

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3yr

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oof. the ending was bad and sad but, i know what your up to mate. good luck.

ch 0 4 Market District

Amnesia: Ashkron

Fantasy · Zerius123

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3yr

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ah yes, good ol anime comedy.

"I'll win next time, just you wait, Hana," Kaede chuckled like a pervert while Hana simply grinned in pride.

Amnesia: Ashkron

Fantasy · Zerius123

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3yr

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the comedy, ha!

"Ashkroooon!" A familiar voice caught his attention as two melons smashed his face. He blushed while the squeals of suffering were muffled before the woman got off him. "How were your classes?"

Amnesia: Ashkron

Fantasy · Zerius123

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3yr

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when your not hungry but hungry at the same time lol

"So, what do you want to eat today?" Hana struck a conversation, knocking Ashkron out of his daze of all the food. He looked up before a drool of saliva came out of his mouth.

Amnesia: Ashkron

Fantasy · Zerius123

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This is my new Review, I am pleased to see this story developed into a wholesome, and emotional story. I just love the Novel. Your writing is on top, world background was splendid, and the Character design, sheesh I was getting emotional! Dude, thank you for making this. I'll me sharing this with a friend of mine and others aight? Good luck on the rest of your Journey!