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it’s really good, i like how u changed it to a 3rd person point of view to better explain each scenarios and each characters. I very much loveee the characters, the formality of the story and the way u deliver the story!! And gosh, i’m already a big fan of aris and cai. It’s actually a big thumbs up, keep it up!!! you’re really a good writer!! ♥️