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A pinch of encouragement until we get more. Keep up the good work. Will comeback after chapter 50.

This is perhaps the most awkward rating I have and would give. While I have given it 5 stars, at the same time did not enjoy it as much as you might think. The reason for that could be best summarized as, this seems more like an english-book inspired take on cultivation/anime/iseki/game genre. It reads very well and more close to a superpower book. In my opinion. However, I think it lacks a certain culture and style that most novel do have here. Does it make it bad, no. But it does lack a certain flavour which is great in these kinds of novel, yes. That is not enough to make me rate badly. So this is one of the best books i do not enjoy. I still like it tho.

OK, I get what you are saying, but if that was the case he should be a bit more mature / scheming / and attempt to at least figure out who to stay away from. As a person who had experienced many lives there should at-least be acknowledgement of the plot against him and a reaction even if it is "this is too childish for me." or "I cant deal with this now." But also the many life of experiences should have given him a neutral characteristic and not "good-guy trope." It is still quite good, just lacking something for me. I plan to give it another go sometime and this is just my opinion, take it with a grain of salt.

I have read the first 30 chapter and can say that it has good writing quality and stability of updates. The story development and character design isn't really for me. While it is decent, I find it rather too generic (good guy trope) and I found his reincarnation rather useless, maybe there will be a reason for that later but for now, all I see is a somewhat obedient little boy in the MC. He had merged with the previous soul, yet there is no fear, or worry, or even acknowledgement that he was killed. Where is the caution, he goes around worrying about his mother, yet why is that? He just came into this world and the memories doesn't seem to affect him, can you generate affection quickly for someone this quickly? If he does have memory of his life as prince then why is there no fear or even a thought about his murder. What is the reason that he wants to get strong? Is it revenge, to protect his loved ones, I still have not found a reason for him or the story. I see no tension or reason to follow the story, his sister seems far more interesting. Usually the environment of fighting for thrones make the characters mature, yet the MC seems to lack that. While the story seems to check most boxes I really did not get an interest in following the MC's story. His origin not really that interesting, his circumstance he seem to not care, his cheat and bloodline a bit generic. I expected more then this from Invincible Corruption Manual. Writing Quality - 5 Stability of Updates - 5 Story Development - 3 Character Design - 3 World Background - 4 The total score - 4