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EvanBardiel
LV 12I enjoy reading futuristic scifi and fantasy novels as well as horror novels. I tend to write in those genres as well. Check out my novel and throw me some feedback.
2020-09-01 Joined United StatesBadges 8
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yea obviously hes's gonna ride them. but I feel like you need to read the rest to see what other stuff he does
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The Black Dawn
Fantasy · EvanBardiel
Yea the wording was off there, when i edit the book after i finish it will be changed. I may even remove a few chapters i feel may not be needed
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The Black Dawn
Fantasy · EvanBardiel
Hes also a young autumn witch so he doesnt realize yes not unkillable.
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The Black Dawn
Fantasy · EvanBardiel
Lol of course he’s gonna ride on the back of a water Steed lol wouldnt you?
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The Black Dawn
Fantasy · EvanBardiel
Thanks! I really appreciate it. Sorry for the errors and mispellIngs i dont Have an editor. Iv been working on DeVeloping every Part of the workd, From the civilized thre’a, to the southern coast of la’velle and the continent to the east. Hopefully you guys enjoy this book and want to read the second. This book will have 70 chapters before i move to the second one
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The Black Dawn
Fantasy · EvanBardiel
Thanks for reading! I hope you Enjoy the story
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The Black Dawn
Fantasy · EvanBardiel
Every person has a dIfferent Ability when they get their super bodies. but the baby having it should be a dead givE away
Ji Ruozhen nodded his head and said, "You're right. You should be careful when it comes to Divinity's Bout. You're indeed powerful now, but relying on external power too much is not a good thing. You should improve your power as much as possible first…"
Super Gene
Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
Also you can come back to my work and ill give you my nUmber lol
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The Black Dawn
Fantasy · EvanBardiel
EvanBardiel#0660 for discord Corysellstuff on snapchat
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The Black Dawn
Fantasy · EvanBardiel
I feel like he rushed through these just to Up his chapter count. Most of these could havw been combined to be one or two chapters.
ch 1353 I Can Kill Ten Thousand of Them
Super Gene
Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
I stopped reading this fan fic. There is no character devrlopement or a progression in the storyline. Why do you think your main character has to be op, overall this is drivle masquerading as a fan fic. You do not take on a beloved work if you aren’T adding substance to the Origonal works. there is no substance here. Its Unimaginative Unoriginal and uninteresting.
ch 10 Ch. 10 Two years
Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector
Book&Literature · Alexander_the_grey
Lol thanks for the fix. sadly enough some stuff slips through. I’m currently working on Three novels and this one is on the backburner most of the time. im also writing a novel irl so im doing alot of writing. feel free to Check out my other novels The black dawn and Dragonsfate- The swift and the savage
He checked his map one more time before leaving the starting zone and headed north. The closest town was to the north towards the icelands, there was a town there where he could go to a shoppe and sell some of the loot he had gained off the surplus of rats and small creatures he had killed for experience. " trash items but i can still get some currency for them. Maybe I can find another instrument and see what sort of abilities i unlock." Scott killed a couple small monsters he encountered along the way, none much stronger than level 3, basic wild boars and saber-cats.
Hidden class
Games · EvanBardiel
I decided to split these last ten chapters between both greggan and ertimus rather than just put them together. I want you to see this journey from both perspectives because yes it is the same journey physically but both boys journeys are personal to them. There's gonna be gaps in greggans view because he's not there for some of the things happening. I decide to have Avery's fate left a mystery because Greggan wasn't there.
ch 62 Greggan
The Black Dawn
Fantasy · EvanBardiel